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person Anon
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Voldemort's demise was both dramatic and funny; "whoops indeed." And as a general comment, I like the sardonic edge to most of the dialog. No matter what you're making your characters do, the sarcasim and general smart ass edginess seems rightly in character.
person FranB
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Voldemort gives a new dimension to the term 'trousersnake'.

I like this story. I check 3 times a day to see if there are new chapters. You nkow how to keep us all in suspense.

FranB
person Donna
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 47 A/N: Um, not necessary...
person firewall
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 48 - Ah, Hermione is quite the crafty one and reads the Dark Lord fairly well. Too bad she wasn't more specific about what he could and wouldn't do to Snape. I have a feeling this could be a very eventful evening in more ways than one.
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ch 50. Well, I HAD been worrying about what would happen to Harry if he went to Voldemort - it seemed impossible for him to actually have the meeting and survive. Oh boy, this is like having one's cake and eating it too. I look forward to Snape messing with Harry's head and making him sweat. Re: owls, I think somewhere in canon there is a description or an implication of how individuals can block being found by owls ... but, hey, even if I remember correctly, so what, this is your universe and I like it.
person lizziebella
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!! I would love to see the power of seduction Voldy has and not to mention his snake cock and serpent tongue. Will Hermione be exploring other sexual partners.
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh scary! I can feel we're getting near something big... :-D LOVING it. A+
person raeann
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha oh goodness i love you and your writing, darling ms. figg. oh man, what troubles these kids get themselves into.... best of wishes to you!
person Static
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Keep updating! ;)
person ccrawley
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so sweet that Voldie killed himself thru greed for power and that Snape gets to play Voldie. Wonder if Dumbledore goes the same way.