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Dumbledore's a cunt.

Ch 54 - YOU DID IT!!!!! (again!) You surprised the tarnation out of me!!! I never saw that coming - it was brilliant!! I hope Pettigrew does get sent to Azkaban with Dumbly, but I still wonder about all the other Death Eaters, 'cuz some of them must be truly evil, wherever they are. I hope Hermy can remove the Dark Mark from Severus - and she can then offer him a sweet deal to give him incentive to stay. After all, he finally has someone even sneakier than he is - and there's the whatever (afterglow?) he gets from sex with her. Plus the respect everyone will give him when he's with her. And opportunities in respectable potions. He might not be willing to call it love, but Hermy might realize it's the best he has to offer.

What a climax! I can't wait to see where you go from here.

chp 51-52: very nice! i really liked the part where he turns the snake into boots....well, there isnt much more to say, your great writing says it all so please update soon!

JW: The Deatheaters don't really stay at the fortress. They come when summoned. Only Peter really stays there to take care of the Dark Lord. He summoned them when he wanted something, to give orders, to show them off or for Revels. Otherwise Voldemort, parinoid that he was, brooded in his fortress alone.

Severus is such a bitch!

That was a great chapter.. Albus finally got what he deserved. And you made me happy about Lucius.. nice guy in this story, ain't he? Can't wait for the fulfilling of the promise.

can't wait for the next chapter

great story so far i hope they get out on time don't let them die and don't give albus death give him life in ascambam

OK, I want to ask a question, but I don't want it to turn out to be a spoiler. I'll just say that I hope Hermione did with her "screening" ability what I thought she did. Hopefully the Order already knows! Thanks for the post!