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person lovethelab
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I knew Lucius was more than just a pretty face! I know I would LOVE to be in the middle of that Syltherin sand"witch"! And just imagine the possiblities - - Oh, I better not let me imagination runn away from me, but Lucius and Severus - At the SAME TIME is just about enough to make me faint! Where are my smelling salts??!!?? Please go on with this story (or a new one that is a follow up) I am sure a good time will be had by all. (And I am sure that Severus, being the good friend that he is to Lucius, will have no problem kepping Narcissa company on those evenings Lucius is away from home with Hermione!)
person Karen
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, I got teary eyed while reading this last chapter.
person DawnEB
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The epilogue that wouldn't die - not that I'm complaining ;) So, just what will Snape and Malfoy do to try and prove themselves the better choice? I'd be on the edge of my seat if I didn't suspect that a new chapter will be posted before I can send in this review :D
person Karen
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, Snape's gotta be Snapey. That's a given. How about Hermione's primordial powers clearing out enough of the crap occluding Snape's soul that he realizes that he's really better off with her? BTW, the Snape in your numbered series is really stellar. You've given other S/H shippers so much to live up to.


Happy Holidays to you
person firewall
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I have to comment on Pam's review - maybe she should choose both....LOL....she'd might be sore in the end!!!!!! LOL SHE SURE WOULD BE SORE IN THE END. hahahahahahaha

You know Ms Figg, I seem to see the need for a Hermione/Severus story developing here. Perhaps as some suggest even a threesome...oh my.
person Koda
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, even for an epilogue, that was really hot.. Lucius is great..
person firewall
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO NO I meant a Hermione/LUCIUS story....
person betwitched
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The way this plot is developing you might consider changing the epilogue(s) into a sequel! LOL I don't care for Malfoy much (in fact not at all) but it would be funny for Hermione to wind up with TWO consorts. That would surely take care of her itch!
person reader
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I AGREE WITH JW DON'T RUIN IT AND PLACE MALFOY WITH THE BEST DARN CHARACTAS. LUCIUS SHOULD BE KILLED OFF.






SEV AND HERM 4 EVA.
person Ryu-chan
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Huh, I'm pretty sure Fawks is a male plus I'm wodering how you're gonna get out of the whole "prophesy" thing...* goes back to reading*