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WOW....maybe she should choose both....LOL....she'd might be sore in the end....Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.

This end of the story is turning in to a story in to it's self, and I love it.

Congratulations on a wonderful story! Fantastic. The ending fit (I couldn't see your Snape falling on his knees and professing his love - for that matter, any Snape doing so), but maybe the epilogue will have a bit of resolution? Either way, great job!

Yeah, Lucius. If the plot doesnt contain Severus, Lucius would do nicely, IMO. Great story BTW. I loved seeing Dumbledore get his.

Ch 59 - no, Hermy has to choose Severus! Severus is the war hero she defended against Voldy and Dumbly. She doesn't need to be "the other woman" for Lucius, who tried to kill Harry, etc. Her reputation - she's the Primordial and not a religious leader, but I think her parents and friends would prefer her not to be openly shagging a married man. You're scaring me!!!

*awww* kind of went off w/ a whisper, not a *bang*. Ok, I'm a romantic & sentimental fool who wants to see Hermione ride off into the sunset with her soulmate Severus *sighs* No chance of that, right? maybe one or two alternate endings, pretty please???

Yes, both.

Epilogue #3 - This is as good as another story. Hmmmm, Major decisions here...both are deviant, both are incredibly sexy, both are attractive to Hermione. One wants nothing from her other than sexual gratification while the other wants what association with her primordial-ness can bring him. With a side benefit of pissing Draco off. hahaha! Oh my dear what to do, what to do. Hmmm, a test drive maybe of each. LOL

I'm kind of a little perplexed by the turn this piece has taken. Still an excellent story mind you, and being an adamant fan of yours, l would have to conclude that this happens to be the best, as l feel the plot has more to offer. However, some of my concerns in relation to the pairings, or should l say groups and possible orgies .. are a tad disturbing. I'm not one to incriminate against LM, as he is a probable favourite of mine, but HG and SS Fan Fic is much more titilating when it deals pre-dominantly with their, and l mean just their .. relationship; which in a nut shell proves to be very complicated on its own.
Of course l have realised that the majority of the reviewers are most interested in a HG/LM/SS fuck fest, and the idea does seem somewhat appealing, yet l still can not grasp this notion, even though the characterisation is ultimately satisfying, especially Hermione's .. it kicks ass, as an indifferent hermione is an ultra uuber sexpot :P I have read so far everything, and anticipate further posts ..... Hopefully your decision is the best one that will consequentially lead to major creamage ;) lol! Your stories undoubtedly integrate the vital occurrences necessary within a SS and HG Fan fic! Personally l HOPE that HG turns the tables on both despots, SS gets over himself, and LM falls over a cliff >_<, and .. HG is such a hotty, and the inclusion of her status as a 'primordial' is superb!!!

I just read chap 49... big, beautiful nose. Hahahahaha! I love it. what a perfect detail to add. this is such a good story. you are a wonderful author. and do i detect a hint of influence from our good friends Rocky and Bullwinkle? Truly classic.