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person denise
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chp 55: very interesting end. i cant say wether i liked it or not...i mean it was well written but a bit sad.definatley sadder than any of ur other stories, but then again this story is definately different and by far the best too. well, im sorry this is such a confusing review, but i think it will take me a bit to see how i really feel. maybe the epilouge will help...
person Avid_HG/SS_Reader
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SS and HG all the way.
It will be Hectic ..
as long as it includes some sought of plot, with the preferential characters, HG and SS. HG and SS, FF rOXXXXors :P :P
person anon
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think there needs to be a sexual competition (a whole lemony bonanza PLEASE) to see who should be her consort.....wouldnt say no to a menage a trois either LOL

go Mrs. Figg! I really wish you could get paid for this :) Then you would be happy and so would we...cannot wait for the rest....

person denise
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chp 58-59: wow, i had jusut finished reading chp 58 when i saw 59 was up...so i decided why not review both at teh same time. i love the new twist in the plot. both guys seem absolutely delicious to me. YUM!! cant wait to see if hermione takes them both (maybe at the same time....who knows....) so please update soon!!
person lilith
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Please make Lucius her consort! (I'm a bit obsessed with Lucius in case you didn't notice ;-)) I can't really imagine Snape turning up. But perhaps there are other deatheaters that suit her (that Zabini guy perhaps?)? I really hope not though. I think Hermione/Lucius would be a good ending. But perhaps she will see Snape again before he dies? (She will live longer than him, won't she?)
person Pandora
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person Anon
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, love it! She better damn well chose my 2 favourite men *swoons* (... I am so in love with you right now *grins*.. theres jut not enough hr/snape/lucius about... and you've characterised them as i love them best :D).. so thank you, thank you, thank you!!!
person Maela
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man...i just can't stop thinking about this ending. It's so sad! Actually...you know what I hope will happen. I hope Severus will see how she kept her promise and didn't try to enslave him. And that ultimately, he'll come back to her.
person LemonLover
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A fitting end to this story, and I think it concluded where it needed to, how it really needed to.

I await your next work with bated typing fingers. :)
person H
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eeeeeeek, will Snape be one of the applicants....:)