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person Edania
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow snape is living the good life now that he is free. Great chapter but i would love to see maybe Lucius having a little part in this. Give him a chance to show , herm , what he has . See if maybe he can out do snape? A little contest maybe? Just a funny thought really. Again..GREAT!
person Hypatia
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, as usual! I have a suspicion that Snape's going to really miss Hermione, even in spite of his cold heart. Am anxious to read the epilogue!!
person beetle juice
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now thats what l'm talkin bout! Keep up the great work! UPDATE!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!!!
person Pandora
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And just let me say, that as much as I have LOVED your other stories, this has entranced me. I have NEVER even reviewed another story. I love the darkness in all of this, but I'd like to see an ending that gives everyone what they need, even if it's not what they think they want. I've been blissfully married to a "Snape" for 15 years myself. I'll never forget him telling me that he wasn't the marrying type... several years later and a beautiful daughter, and his darkness has melded nicely into mine.
I'll repeat myself...no man is an island unto himself.
person JW
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 56-57 - c'mon, Severus!! Don't let that Lucius beat you!! She needs you and you need her, whether or not you admit it!! More gold to feed the plot nifflers!!!
person nessie
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it so much i cried.
person Edania
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once more you blow mind with your writing skills. Seems she is looking for snape . I wonder will he come? Oh i can see this chapter going into a few chapters. I mean looks like snape is not the only one who wants her. Again..great story . I have to say the chapter was very funny. I sit here and wait for you new chapte..Like to say "the longer the better sometimes."
person chicca
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! :(
person droxy
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm_ I say she gets her consort (Lucius) and that makes Snape ticked. :) I feel bad for Hermione, a gal who has everything but has nothing.
person mbg
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Freak, freak, freak! Turn her in to a freak! LOL! :P