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well. I basically know in the end she'll choose Severus, but I want to see what happens along the way..

Ch 55 - Wow! That was one hot final time together! was impressed that he took the time to look and see what she needed and I was even more impressed that he left. So will we know if she finds someone who even comes close to the really perfect union that they had? It seems a shame for a primordial to be alone with all that power. I know she probably could have persuaded him with her power to stay but she was strong and didn't or at least I don't think she did. Who knows, you may have him come back and offer himself to her. Waiting for the epilogue.

Poor hermione :( the PM has left her. I do really wonder how this will end.

Yay for plot nifflers!!!!!!!!! I hope they keep coming to you! I love your stories; they're always so detailed and thorough( in every way*wink*)!

Ms Figg, I know you asked us not to respond here but I'm going to. Have you considered going with your strength...writing? It would probably mean you leaving us but have you thought of writing romances...a popular publisher certainly offers enough scope that you should be able to find a format that would suit your writing style. After reading your work and knowing the speed with which you can write, you should consider this option.

Oh man, I can't believe I suggested that. I would hate to lose you here but I know what it's like to need work.

Let her have both.

YAY!!!

Ch 55 - AUGH!!!!!!!! There had better be an epilogue, kiddo, 'cuz this is not an adequate conclusion. "...his black heart. There was nothing anyone could do to breech that broken, twisted part of him." Well, she's a Primordial - that means she CAN do things to him, reach "inside the blackest heart" - and who else can understand what she has been through??? Only Harry watched what happened, and even he doesn't fully understand her. (Plus he's too much like a brother.) Perhaps Severus needs a walkabout or something. She needs him!!!! (And I need S&H together in the epilogue...... reader sends author a chocolate-covered fruitcake as bribe....)

mmmm

Can you say m

Epilogue 1? Does it mean that there will be epilogue 2 or maybe chapter 2:the sequel?
I think all your readers hope so. P.L.E.A.S.E.

I hope Severus is reading the magazine.
Maybe Lucius could brag about is interview with hermione and it could come to Severus ears. Jealousy should make him come back. I guess he is not very far.