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chp 60-61: charmy may not be the only one waving her fist. lol. this is sheer torture! i cant wait to see what happens next!! please please update real soon!

After reading the whole, blessed thing, I have to say... (and it chokes me).. that Snape isn't worthy to lick Hermione's boots in this story.

He hasn't shown one wit of worthy, human sentiment.....yet Hermione has become the Primordial, the hope of Wizard kind... with no sins upon her, unless from the Christian/Islamic perspective: excessive lust for a man many readers deem worthy, based on his actions and attitudes.

I have no problems with Snape being such a monodimensional, emotionally stunted pig who fucks women who are no match for Hermione....but I think you should have made her monodimensional here as well... I don't mean to turn Snape into a teddy bear, as many want...but perhaps to make Hermione realize that this man cannot ever satisfy her psychological and intellectual needs, but only her physical ones..and that might only be temporary.

I can't help but feel sorrow for Hermione here, and nothing but spite for Snape.

Oh my god.

* drools, as her hands begins to shake with need* My god what your story does to me. Oh you have both my favorite wizards..oh to mucch * faints* oh and good chapter*faints again*

Wow, what an epic! Great story, glad it did not end too darkly. I confess, I am one of those people who love a warm fuzzy ending.

Typo in the third paragraph....sorry.

"Worthy" should actually read "unworthy."

Second paragraph...apoologies!!!!!

Oh man. looked like snape got the girl! shame..would have been fun if she got them, but oh well she did had a taste of both.

OMG!! OMG!! ~Fans herself~ So hot can't handle it. Next chapter please!!!!!!!

YAY, hermy picked snapey.