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person denise
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chp 63: as much as i liked it, i am a bit dissapointed that there wotn be anymore threesome activity....and i kind of wanted a bit more about lucius (sp?) and hermione. in a way though, i am glad that she chose snape though...because now she can confront him about his jealousy and maybe you could add a small scene with lucius and narcissa now?? maybe...hopefully...anyway, cant wait to see what happens next! update soon!
person septentrion
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
epilogue 6 : that you do, stretch the tension ! I feel like there's a heat wave, although it's winter outside !
person ccrawley
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please.
person denise
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chp 64: well, i guess its over! i really really liked teh story....and the ending, well it was abrupt. but unfortunatley im still left craving some hermione and lucius action and maybe some narcissa and lucius action too, so maybe u could write a fic about that next (just a suggestion....). cant wait to read your next story!
person Anon
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Epilogue # 7 & 8 - Well what else would you expect of a pair of macho wizards who both think with their cocks. Bet if Hermione had more control over them, it would have ended up differently. Nicely done, Ms Figg.
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY ROCKED! I LOVED IT! I ESPECIALLY LIKED HOW HERMIONE GOT RID OF DUMBLEDORE AND HOW SHE AND SEVERUS CAME TO AN...ARRANGEMENT OF SORTS IN THE END! I CAN'T WAIT TILL YOUR NEXT STORY! KEEP UP THE AWSOME WRITING!

YOUR BIGGEST FAN,
TIFFANY
person Hypatia
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my stars!! A LM/HG/SS sandwich!! Just a note of caution, Ms. Figg...this HAS been done before by other authors, so if you want to make this truly memorable it needs to be really, really....um, imaginative. Not that I'm trying to give you ideas or anything!
person firewall
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry that was me reviewing up above ^
person ccrawley
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Simply loved the story. Although the ending was a little sappy, but good. Looking forward to next story. Thank you so much for writing this story.
person Anon
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh this is gonna get hot. Can't wiat!