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person Kay
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pins and needles...pins and needles!
person cherie
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, you have my attention!! What happens next.
person angel
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are right she is twisted ..please more ~grins~

angel
person droxy
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am above all sentiimental. I will heed the warnings. I am not sure I want to read brutal!Snape with our wonderful Hermione. But the idea of reading a dark Severus from you is a strong temptation. I already feel sorry for Hermione is Snape is a hopeless cause and a nasty sadistic evil brute. However, he did give her a warning. Dilemmas dilemmas, what am I to do? This is not going to be pretty.
person lovethelab
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are such a prolific author! I can barely keep up with the reading, let alone reviewing! You are super!! I can't wait to see what happens to lure Hermione back into the dungeons! Will it be eavesdropping on a certain Slytherin trio? Or maybe Crookshanks is lost? Or she finds Snape twisted and broken in the hall and helps him to bed and he helps himself? Just too many possibilities! I can't wait for your next chapter. Ann
person beeky63
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is I again. Loved the last fic but damn it made me hungry. As for this one, it promises to be your best yet! I just loved the way you described Severus' darkness, it is probably the closest to canon that I have read yet in fanfic. I'm in desperate need of an update to feed my addiction. Keep up the good work.
Toodles.
person Koda
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Certainly a nice beginning. I'm hooked! Although, if it gets too dark, I can't guarantee I'll stick with it, but I'm here for now. :)
person a_reader
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dark fics don't scare me. I confess to liking Snape with an edge. It's way more believeable than sappy!snape.
person angel
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh please please more ... i would like to read what is going to happen next .... later for now

angel
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow before i read this i must say you dont waste time i just finished your last written fic a little while ago now a new one already i wish i had your creative mind well im sure this one will be great