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for Just a Husband *With Beta*

by redclawjbq

person pandora
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story and lovely to read. My favorite the reaction of Snapes father after he find out about Harry POTTER. *grin* It reminds me of Vernon Dursley.Iam looking forward to chapter three.
person sweettee
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter at the end was so cute when Harry was so gental with the Virgin Snape.
please up date soon.
person Brit
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Talk about a gut clenching feeling.... Fear of not being hurt withthe fear of know the person who will take you owns you and you can do nothing about it. *shivers* not something I ever want to experiance. I'm enjoying wha you got so far and can't wait for next week's chapter. Will you always be sending update notices to After Class Yahoo!Group?

Brit
person Sahira
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, just lovely.I love the way you have made Severus look so "weak".Update:)
person andie
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice. I'm used to Severus marrying unwilling Harry, not this way. I like your writting!
person madwriter
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Updateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdate soon!! I love fics like this!!
person Relicwitch
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just loved the two chapters.
Can't wait to find out what's goig to happen next.
You only got you story better with your beta,because all the errors (they were some) are gone.
the story concept is quite nice and that didn't change one bit.
Carry on and keep up the good work.
person ice owl
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 was rather decent. I could actually see Harry treating his husband like that, especially if it were Severus.
person Newtype
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet chapter, drmatic and nicly done, please do oncor us with another chapter
person Mrs. Stephanie Black
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic, update soon!!!