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Um, if Logan adopted Harry, wouldn't Harry's last name change to his? It's not like Harry owes anything to the Potters after they abandoned him. I would think that he would want the name of his Real father, and not the sperm donor. Just a thought.

Really like this story. I like the way that the xmen are interacting with the wizards. Thanks!

I usually don't read crossovers, but I decided to give yours a try. I am glad I did. Logan makes a great overprotective dad.

another good chapter. I like your story and I just want to punch a few people. Don't give up because of a few people...there are others that still like it.

Logan to the rescue!!!

great update keep it up

Great chapter, I couldnt' wait for James to get on the wrong side of Wolverine's claws. Great work. Can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.

Never thought to look here, did you? Just remove the spaces. Original name: James Howlett, changed it to Logan. Apparently only the one name, now, but...

http:// www. marveldirectory. com/individuals/w/wolverine .htm

GO LOGAN

This could be a rather interesting story. Could be. From the style of writing, I'd say you're between twelve and fourteen years old. Not bad, for that age. But I suggest you read some of the better authors, and try to copy their styles of writing. You're a bit choppy, and could use some smoothing out. Who does what and when is important, but so is setting the scene, and that alone can help smooth things out. Descriptions of surroundings, feelings, motivations, reactions, and other factors are what I'm talking about. But do examine HOW some of the better authors write, not just the story line.

I also suggest you proofread your work after the spell-checker gets done with it. Just because it's spelled correctly doesn't mean you have the right word.

Good luck with your writing. Sincerely.

Great chapter, i loved it... go logan!!
Can't wait for more... and more Draco :P
Chow for now!