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for Something Much Darker II

by beccaky

person Bree
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! I loved the first part to it but I didn't think that you had intentions of carrying on with it, but thank you for doing so!! I absolutely love a possessive yet tender but dark Snape :)
person Applekissis
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAHHHHHHHYEAHHHHHHHHHHHHYEAHHHHHHHHHH

IM GLAD ALBUS KNOWS,AT LEAST HE WONT GET FIRED AND SHE EXPELLED...VERY EROTIC AND DEMANDING..I LOVED THIS CHAPTER..THE SEX SCENE WAS MIND BLOWING..LOL
person angel
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man severus is like the energizer bunny ~lol~ please please please more i love it ..later for now

angel
person Pam
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
person Angie30
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved how Severus took care of her after so many hours of sex. Holy cow four hours! Now that is stamina lol. Love the last line he spoke "No, she is My Darling." *Grins*
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved what Severus said to Albus about Hermione being his! ROFLMAO! I loved the two latest updates! Update again and soon!

Tiffany
person Miepje
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story really should be read with a bucket of ice-cold water ready to put out fire coming from the screen or to stop the reader from melting! ^^lol

Damn: some hot stuf... So update soon please!

*keeps fanning self for lack of ice-cubes*
person JW
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 11 - "Do your worst" - go, Hermy! Go, Snapey!!
person Angie30
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo hot! Love it! Severus showing his much darker side and Hermione being game for it. *shivers* (oh to be in her place *grins*) Great Job hun! look forward to another update.
person Applekissis
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well dayum..that just..*whew*..I think i need..*whew* a cigarette,*blushes*..Wait i dont even smoke..lol