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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting.... and angsty ^^
I'm intrigued, please keep writing!
I'm intrigued, please keep writing!
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it!
Keep it up
Keep it up
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mh... Not bad this side of Draco. I'm quite curious about how this is going to develop- ^^
write more, please!
write more, please!
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was hot! YUMMY, YUMMY, YUMMY. More Please...
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is very captivating in its intensity, and I am definitely looking forward to seeing how things will unfold. My one very minor complaint has to do with your formatting. Your dialogue is smushed together and surrounded by expository sentences. There's nothing wrong with adding exposition to dialogue, but when there are no linebreaks it can become a little confusing and sometimes the reader may lose track of who is speaking.
That's just a minor problem in an otherwise very well-written, dramatic, and compelling story.
That's just a minor problem in an otherwise very well-written, dramatic, and compelling story.
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. This story has so much potential.
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Super hot!1
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is simply amazing. You have created an entire world out of the Harry Potter world. The characters are more real and more interesting and simply amazing. The story is realy, the emotions are real.. i even felt them sometimes. I cant get over how wonderful your Hermione and Draco are. Please please please continue and update quickly. This is fast becoming my favorite story and i cant wait for more.
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good!
Update soon please!
I really like the plot!
Update soon please!
I really like the plot!
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I can't wait to see more!