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Ah! I love your story. So full of emotion and tension, I couldn't tear my eyes off of it. Great stuff, keep going please!

This is getting soooo good, I love how Draco is so torn apart inside and now that Hermione has seen him like this, oh please update soon!

ooooh, please update soon!

Angst is a fave for me. I love Angst and this is just brilliant.

Again, update soon! Please!

Bek

woah. this story is really intense. update soon please!

this is just an amazing piece of work. your perspective on these two blows my mind. i just ache when each chapter ends and i cannot wait for more. really. you need to update now.

Great story! One of the best I read and a very long time. You make thing seem so real, and you just don't with one point of view, which is great I love. And this is the first time I'm seeing Harry as well... how Ron would act, which is diff. but great too, everything is I can just go on and on how much I'm loving your story, but I'm not I think this is enough for now. Just keep up the great work! ^_^

This is good, really really good! Most of the stories here are rushed and well, not detailed at all... but this I love. Keep up the excellent work!!!!

WOW. That's all I can say. I really don't like the cliche head boy/girl fics, but this one has so much hatred and raw emotion, I really loved it! Especially that kiss scene! How hot! I can hardly wait until the next chapter.

i have to say i don't really make comments on writing just the story concept but you have that something that i have found many want to be writers long for. i come to this site for the excitment in storyline but i often find a story that doesn't make to much sense and leave out details that could come in handy for the reader to understand the story more or bore the reader with way too much detail. detail is nice but a lot of people put to much into it and not focus on the acual story at hand. i also am not a big fan of "Like that would happens" reviews reviewers leave when a story doesn't go the way they think JK would have written it (what would be the point of fanfiction then?) but i do have to say i could accually see this. it's believable, well leaving out book six of course, unless it takes place after that in which i am sorry. lol but since i have bored you to death the point is this is fantastic, well written and i love the storyline, great job and i do hope to see another chapter up soon!

Okay I want to see where this is going but I'm scared at the same time. Is this gonna be some sick story in which Hermoine gets f'd over? Geez I don't know if I can handle that. So far this is brilliant but like I said I'm scared to read more... I hate thinking that Malfoy could break her, when it should be the other way around. Either way this is a great story, and even if it doesn't work out the cheesy way that I would like it is still a great story.