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wow im like in shock at how much emotion is put into this its crazy and it makes me want to read more so i cant wait till the next chapter comes out till then ttyl

This story is really fucked up and the way you portrayed Hermione was as fucked up as this story, you made her into a heartless uncaring selfish bitch who doesn't give a shit about anyone with the exception of Harry and Ron, hell anyone else could be dying in front of her and she would probably shake her head and left them there to die. I could understand they way Malfoy acted, but Hermione? The story was well written, and I understand not everything can have a happy ending but damn that was fucked up. Is this the last chapter? I really do hope Malfoy isn't dead. Come to think of it Wouldn't Hermione be blamed for Malfoy's death *if he really is dead* then that would mean she would have to give up her Head Girl position, cause surely they don't want a suspect for murder telling their kids what to do. But wouldn't that mean she'll go to Azkaban? I don't know, well hopefully next time you make a story it won't be as tragic as this.

Wow - this is amazing. I am in awe! This has got to be one of the strongest Draco's I have ever read. Your mastery of his mental and emotional state are incredible in depth and development. Two enthusiastic thumbs up. The only critism I can thing of is Hr. She's still well done but a little weak in contrast to Dr. Keep it up!!

I absolutely love your story! It's so in character it's amazing. Draco is exactly what he would be like. Please write some more soon.

And I thought it'd be hard to top the last chapter! That was freaking awesome! Can't wait for more...

This story is just so good!
Update soon!!!

WOW!!!! thiS is soooo omG continue!! UPDATE PLZ...itz realli good!! :D Good JoB

MWUAHAHAH! It keeps getting better and better... did i love that last scene or did I love it? Uh huh. I love how confused he is.. and come on, we all like lil weak Hermione. Well maybe not all. But I do! She tries so hard... but yet she's still a weak lil girl in some level. Beautiful :D

Good. Because I would have hated to read what kissing recently thrown up bile is like.

But all joking aside, this stuff is gooood. Such raw sentiments, that it's almost effing sick. I'm jealous! With the way you pen your words, I don't think you have to worry much about how your stuff comes out. Seriously, I love how when Hermione or Draco have their solo rants, they have these moments of continuous chain of thoughts (with very colorful language). I think that's how most of our minds work---thinking too much and too fast to piece out coherent thoughts one at a time.

And it's very honest how difficult this relationship of theirs is, and how disturbing the excursions it has on both. Yeah, I would want a perfect relationship to be like cake but for Hr/Dr, it couldn't have happened, for real, any other way.

One of the better written stories about HG/DM I've read in a while. Angst but not childishly so, introspection but not a painful amount....
I really like it. The characters are easy to empathise with. Write more!!