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for Water

by kissherdraco

person Reembrand
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! Please no Draco has this magic power over Hermione and she can do nothing but bend to his will, etc.
person 0o0itznitelite
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGAWDDD... I REALLYY LOVE DISS STORRIEE... DRACO IS SOO MEAN N VICIOUS.. N DATZZ WAT MAKES IT GOOODD.... U HAVEE TOO UYPDATEE... PLEASEEEE.... I LOVEEE U IF U UPDATEEE MOREE.. HAHAHAHA
person curlyq2713
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah.

woah.

please update soon! lol
person fiona
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pauses for a moment of silence... wow that was so... amazing, i mean so much raw emotion the heat that builds between them anger and passion. i can't wait to read what comes next. will he let her help him fight his demons will he admit the feelings he has for her to himself and to her... well we will see please update soon!
person jadziadaxx
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
now... we are getting to the meat of it! Excellent!
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
there is no end to my respect and admiration for this fic and your writing. im glad you didnt give in and have them tumble into googly eyes and i-love-yous straight off the bat. how you're portraying this makes sense to me. the character development here is well worth waiting for. im sure you must be under huge pressures and tons of reviews hehe. but whatever your instincts are, they sure as hell are paying off! my thanks to you for making a night of studying bearable. cant wait for your next update.
person Rhapsody
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Update! It seemed like you were nervous about how readers would take the Harry scenes, but I think they worked. Anyone who has read the books knows how angry and fixated Harry can become and I think that you definitely captured his angst. I feel that Harry has a tendency to jump to conclusions and not think about his actions, although once he's calm he can be levelheaded. So, no worries, it rocked. On a smaller note, I can never understand why people try and rush the sex scenes. I personally enjoy a plot and if someone doesn't there are plenty of incredible PWPs out there for every ship in HP. Still for myself I like sex as the dessert :). Can't wait for the next update. Thanx
person jessysgirl
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!!! I can't believe you left it hanging like that! Oh, I swear I'll die if you don't update in the next five minutes! Jesus, what the hell is Harry going to do? Please, hurry with the rest and good luck!
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
um, is this going to turn into a lust-then-love fic? or a lust fic? because i'm not seeing much of either rite now. o well, this IS in the hermione/draco section for a reason...i'll hold out!! only joshing, i really like this!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is such a fabulous story with the perfect amount of Hermione/Draco angst. whatever you do please dont stop writing!