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by kissherdraco

person HanNa
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was AWESOME i cant way to the next chapter, what will harry do? please update soon
person Jo
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! The only thing is that Harry and Ron seem a little bit out of character...But other than that absolutely fantastic! Update soon!
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapter and don't worry about dragging it out too long- it's not remotely believable otherwise and this way you've added so much more credibility to the characters. Harry is starting to be a little much though, although it is nice for him to be the one over reacting for once instead of Ron. Don't leave us waiting with that cliff hanger for too long! Great writing!
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best hg/dm stories i have ever read! it's so real, i love it!
person Hunidew
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I've been reading this story since it was published and I think its B-E-A Utiful! This last chapter was TOO intense for me! I hope that all those words that Draco is saying to Hermione means that he loves her in some sick twisted sort of way. And Harry...hmm..Is he really that obsessed with Hermione that he would go to killing someone even if he is his just his school enemy?
person 2bfoundwanting
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My goodness gracious. How do you do it? This is most definitly, with out a doubt, now my favorite fic. Your characterizations are amazing, AMAZING. I really really truly cant wait for more. I really hope you update soon. This is such a... good story. So well done, close to perfect. AH! I dont know how to explain it, just know that i love it, and i cant wait for more!
person elle6778
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastically emotional! You brought me onto a roller coaster ride with this story. I loved all the conflicting emotions between Draco and Hermion. Draco's evilness was very well written. Love it! Update soon!
person Rhapsody
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your Draco. I will admit that at first I was a little put off by him, but as I continued to read and got insight into Malfoy's thoughts I just felt like the whole thing fit. I love in Chapter 4 when he states that he's being mean to Hermione for his father and wondering if his father can see him. It's so tragic and so absolutely true of the thoughts that I could imagine someone being raised by Lucius Malfoy having. Draco's cracking up and it's great :). Thank you for the D/Hr fix, I really enjoy this story and can't wait to read the next chapter.
person moxie
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another AMAZING chapter! Methinks out man Draco is finally breaking.
person Maiya
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
REALLY awesome story! Very well written. I love the way you portray the characters. Can't wait for more, please continue soon.