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I love this stroy!!!!!!!!!!! I hope you update soon!

cool... i really like this! you know there's a difference between fucking and making love. making love really doesn't seem to be what will happen very soon but fucking seems really not to far off, i hope that making love is in the future though. i wonder what harry will do i can't wait to find out! well great job and update soon! :)

omg....im addicted to this....plz update like in two minutes....!!!! ill love you forever

Your writing is intense and terrifying. However where is the story. 4 chapters and the hatred is prevelant. Are
you telling me that Dumbledore and McGonagall would allow this to happen?? I just do not understand where you
are going with this. Unless one of them or both go completely mad.

Absolutely lovely. You capture the characters so vividly. I especially enjoy how you represent the relationships between the characters amongst the "Golden Trio" and Draco. I think you build an excellent case of why it would be so difficult for both of them to come to terms with the attraction. I applaud you for your writing! Oh, and the inner thoughts and dialogues exchanged are so spot on. Well done. I can't WAIT to read more. Your story is so good that you made me comment!

who was the stupid slag who left the last review??!! what a twat!!! he/she needs to read this freakin' awesome story again before typing that there's no lust!!!!!!!!!!!! kno y? THIS IS THE BEST FIC EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and the author NEEDS TO UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i loved the last chapter, where draco almost kissed her. if i have to say one thing, it's that you're making this realistic by exploring draco's personality and feelings, it's very deep. not to mention hermione struggling with ehr own. so please, PLEASE, I BEG YOU!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!

Christ, I am so fucking dead right now. Coming out from this chapter I didn't even realize I was holding my breath until the last sentence- that's how fucking intense this was. Keep it up.

Umm....wow! I must say that I am truly impressed with your writing skills. I find the story fascinating and am very keen (yes keen) to continue reading it. I think the story has a lot of potential. I like how you show both their points of views without having to have defiant action break. I know you asked about the writing format and the only thing I find difficult to follow is when a character has two lines in a row but those two lines are broken up into different paragraphs without you identifying that the speaker has not changed. Other than that I really like your story, you seam very talented.

oh my gosh. sometimes i hate harry. but that was flippin AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no hiding the secrets from the rest of the golden trio, nope, harry's right there!!!!!!!!!!!! i LOVE your character analysis of draco!!!!!!!!!!! you're really delving into his character. when i saw you had updated this i went and did a little joy dance in the living room and my family looked at me strangely...but i love this!!!!! thanks for updating. looking forward to the next one!

Amazing, amazing, and amazing. Seriously.

This story is so suspenseful and intense it makes me want to throw my chair because I can't read faster. You portray Draco and Hermione's attitudes and actions sososo extraordinarily and perfectly. I love your style, too.

/Damn./