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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is awesome. i just found it and i need to have more. great job.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THATS NOT GOOD
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet lol so much hatred that its hot lol i dunnno how to explain it but its good cnat wait till the next ones come out
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Every chapter you write gets better and better.
Keep it up, seriously, addicted.
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Keep it up, seriously, addicted.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!!!! i absolutley love your story. i believe that its the BEST story of these two characters i had ever read!!! it's so real and the intensity just wonderful. I have finals to study for but I
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to let you know that you have written a wonderful story here. There comes a point when you get sick of all the tortured!Draco and forgiving!Hermione. Or people who forget that they hate each other. I havn't read the 5th chapter yet, but I'm about to. I have an affinity for Draco. Any Draco. But I like yours a lot. I like that he has physical reactions to his feelings and that he hates himself for everything. He's constantly trying to live up to an impossible standard that he really doesn't even need anymore. It's interesting. Harry gets a bad wrap sometimes, I'm glad you've given him reasoning and the ability to get angry when it's the right time to be angry.
Ignore the bad reviews. Everyone has their own expectations. I admire a writer who ignores the "oh good go just make them have sex!" group of fans. That's why there is such a thing as pornography. Keep to your plot and let it lead you where ever it likes.
(and now I will shamlessly promote myself) check out my writing at fanfiction.net under the name Mooncroww (shameless promotion over)
Amanda
Ignore the bad reviews. Everyone has their own expectations. I admire a writer who ignores the "oh good go just make them have sex!" group of fans. That's why there is such a thing as pornography. Keep to your plot and let it lead you where ever it likes.
(and now I will shamlessly promote myself) check out my writing at fanfiction.net under the name Mooncroww (shameless promotion over)
Amanda
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I for one love the continuing intensity and frustration. You're a very good writer and this was great! As is getting to be my habit, can't wait for more.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome chapter!
So Draco finally spills, huh.
Write more soon!
So Draco finally spills, huh.
Write more soon!
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
couldn't sleep i have a cold and it's driving me mad so i thought hey while i'm up why don't i read some and the most amazing thing happened i saw that you updated so my heart sang yesss! and now i think i can sleep oh how i love your story! it is true you can't make everyone one happy but you sure made me! well i thought the whole harry part was brill and i usually don't care for harry/hermione stuff, but that was great! i totally see where this is heading may not predict what will happen but i understand what is going on, you know, the jist of it. as always this chapter was filled with such emotion it really pulls you in and i love that! i really am looking forward to the next chapter. update soon! like you have been your amazing with how fast you get them out you wouldn't happen to be already finished with would you lol oh just one more time cause i know you love it I LOVE THIS!!!
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I not only love you for updating AMAZINGLY fast, but for churning out such an unbelievable chapter! I loved the way Draco totally spilled his guts. I can't wait to see what's going to happen with Harry and them. This should be interesting. Keep up the good work and don't let any stuck up reviews bring you down!