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for Water

by kissherdraco

person Lulu
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOO! Why, why did the chapter end so soon? Man, I feel jumpy. I'm addicted. These are the first signs of addiction... and all because of your story. It is really brilliant. The characters are real and emotional. You've got me hooked... and I'm loving it!

Udate soon please :)
person Anon
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. amazing as usual. I love how you had Draco provoke Harry into beating him- it was the perfect way to resolve the argument. Hermione needs to stand up to Harry soon though and call him on his behavior or at least tell him that he needs to trust her enough to look out for herself. I can't wait to see what happens once Hermione and Draco are alone together again. you've created genuinely three-dimension characters that I love (well, except for Harry) and please post again when you get the chance!
person Alice
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mm, I absolutely love how it's going now.
Poor Draco and Hermonie.
My exams are this week and it's been so hectic and reading this just takes a load off from all the constant work this semester.
And thanks for the consistant updates
person shagmedraco
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fucking...woah...

i'm in love with this story! I really hope you update soon cuz I wanna know what Harry's gonna do. I want to know whats gonna happen! It seems as though you've been updating pretty quickly but I saw in an authors note that you had the first few chapters written before posting anything. So, here's me being selfish and hoping that you have no life and all you do all day and night is sit there typing your little heart out on this story so I can get a new chapter tomorrow....
person tressesinthewind
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why do you torture me so... damn bloody good chapter but I want more!
person southern cross
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i almost cried out loud when i saw that there was a new chapter!!!! call me sick, call me twisted but i love your DRACO....so broken, so angry and dammit i just love and hate him all at once...

harry is just a, well i don't know, but things are only getting more intense and i hope hermione goes back to help pick up malfoy's pieces. God i hope you update soon.

~sara~
person Petalsoft
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see another chapter up! It made my evening. Such emotional writing, it just draws you in. I'm a big time skimmer of stories, looking for significant parts, but I have to say that yours draws me to every word like very few stories have. That's saying a lot. Your writing style is fabulous - emotion is even conveyed by the structure of your sentences. Bravo! I know you're tired, but you have to keep going with this - I need to see what Harry does. Thank you for this brilliant story.
person Jess
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was incredible. You really are a wonderful writer. And for all those who say you need to hurry it up and get to the raunchy... well, don't listen. The pace is perfect and it suits the story and the characters. I can't wait for your next chapter!
person southern cross
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
have i mentioned lately how amazing this story is? it just blows me away. i love the dark, angsty way you have tangled the two of them. you draco is so angry, so fucked up and it's delicious. truly it is. and if there was anyone who could handle him, it's your hermione. she's strong and soft, but steel underneath. and dammit they are so hot together! i really hope you don't rush things between them, it wouldn't feel "real" if you did, but i have to hope that at some point they find a place for each other together.

so harry was intense and a bit meddlesome, but i guess that HAS to happen right? but i would hope his interference wouldn't push them to much further apart. oh, and i am secretly waiting for their eventual coupling, because with all that pent up emotion, it's bound to be...explosive.

amazing work!

~Sara~
person Jani
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAHHHHHHH! I must know what happens next!! This is such a great story you got here. Its detailed beautifuly and yet never dull for a moment, Im so glad that I didn't pass this story.