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jesus effing christ. and you wrote these newest chapters in what, a few days? what the fuck. you completely kill me. christ. the emotion in the 7th chapter is so fucking raw and tangible- i could feel that tension/need/hate in the air for god's sake. that's how it was. and that whole deal of draco and his father is so. guh. it's so fucked. up. but i can believe it, you know? it's there and it's real and i love how you've got that whole father-son deal worked out. also, i'm in love with the 6th chapter. that trio moment made my heart hurt so fucking much. christ. i can't even describe it. - i'm anticipating the next update. (will we ever see more of ron?) i think this is one of the best fics i've read in a long time.

its bloody brilliant, absolutely have their relationship pinpointed down to the bone!..............keeps me on the edge on my seat....not just an everyday fluff romantic.....keep it up! please write again soon....driving me mad

WOW I love your fic. It's so angsty and that just keeps me hooked. Update soon!

You've got to be fucking kidding me! This is so suspenseful... This story is so emotional and so raw and I love how you make the characters so passionate. I figure that's how Hermoine and Draco would be with the passionate hate boiling on the surface of something else. I'm just afrain because I don't know what you plan to do with the characters. As much as I am for the hard-core passionate hate, I also like the falling in love with each other side of that. When there's passionate ups there are passion downs kind of thing. If Hermoine gets screwed (not literally, literally I believe is exactly where this is headed!) I'm gonna be kind of upset because I like to think of her as stronger than that. But it is your story and either way you go with it it is an extremely exceptional story, and I love it, and I most defintely cannot wait for the next chapter!!!

HOLY FUCK YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT. The way you get inside their heads is amazing. I cant get enough of this haha.

OH GOD!! That was the best thus far! Chapter 7 has left me speechless...

ahh, I absolutly loved this!!
I am soo fucking addicted to it now, please update faster.
I'm really anxious to see how harry reacts.
They're all a bit on edge and I want to see how it ends.
But other than that, awesome job of the extreme feelings that our lovely characters Draco and Hermonie feel.

That small chapter was perfect. I dont know how you make the feelings and emotions, the surroundings jump out like you do, but when i was reading that 6th chapter i felt so safe, i didn't want it to stop, but i knew it had to. And then this last chapter. Talk about drama. But not in the over dramatic, unrealistic, just doing it for the story way. This really feels like this story has a life. That it is going where it should, nothing is forced and all the characters are perfect because they aren't pretending to be something, they just are. You have created an entire world with in this world of JK Rowlings. The tension was amazing, the sorrow that draco felt and frustration and anger and need that Harry felt was heartbreaking. GOODNESS! I wish i could just gush to you but Im afraid that i am at aloss of anything else to say... at the moment.
And finally, i absolutly love how fast you update. You dont even know. Reading your story makes my day.

YOU know, I'm kind of a dork. I came here around... what was it? 1am? Prospect of classes the next morning and all, saying - ONE one-shot, and that's it. TO BED with your ass, missy! And then there weren't any nice one-shots. And then I saw the summary and was like - OK, let's give it a shot. 5 chapters? Eh, I can have that, I'll read fast.

But nooo, ooohhohhoh noo. You came, with your 9827349348793 words a chapter and I -- I just couldn't say that even ONE of those words was wasted. EACH and every word was perfectly paced, placed, it read amazingly and I was addicted after the first paragraph. FOR THE LOVE OF PETE, I stayed up till 4 reading it all (I'm a slooow reader, and b-sides, I wanted to ENJOY everything ;P) and ha, hahah skipped all my classes today. Doesn't matter, I only had two of 'm. BUT STILL, this... this is something else. I ADORE your Draco, how he's acting towards Hermione, it makes my heart SHRINK and blow up at the same moment, I swear. And Hermione, OH HERMIONE poor Hermione, she's reacting so perfectly. So perfectly Hermione and girly and maayan I'm in agony here - I can't WAIT for them to, yaknow, humpadump already. KISS, all I ask is a kiss plleeeaaassse. And OH man, I salut you - I DO! For what? For Ron. How many times have I seen people take Ron, give him a baboon brain and Hermione be all "Oh won-won you're so stupid *giggle*" and I'm all GRRR stfu Sue. BUT YOU DIDNT! YOU gave Ron text, lines, THOUGHTS God forbid! And you totally erased the R/Hr conflict and replaced it by a BRILLIANT H/Hr one. And you should know, H/Hr is like - my ARCH ENEMY. But now... man, I can't WAIT to see how it unfolds. YOU GOTTA give us more!

I loved this. Endlessly. And now I demand more, MORE, MORE! You brought it on yourself, really, for I am now your fangirl and I am not going away until you feed me. SO, go ahead! FEED ME! *jumpsyou*

Thanks for updating so quickly - what a treat! Again, I felt like I was on a thrill ride, emotionally, and I didn't know what would happen next. It was riviting. I'm still trying to figure out if Harry has a thing for her or if he's just being a protective friend/brother sort. I'm kinda hoping it's the first because jeolousy is always great to put in there. But I would feel bad for Harry, too, because it's obvious a Hermione/Draco story, so Harry really doesn't look like he'll be considered a love interest in Hermione's eyes. But - who knows? You do! So please... keep up this awesome writing - you're doing fabulous!