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by kissherdraco

person Brianna
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As I said before I LOVE ur story I agree with Anon it is so intense and you really do hold your breath through it... will everything end happily ever after?
person Tammatha
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
one word "Brilliant!"
person Anon
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, what can I say? I'm sucked into every scene, I imagine it as clearly as anything in my head and I find I'm there, among those 2. The way you write, you slip from one character to another, and this works amazingly. I love the way you've percieved the characters, I hate Harry with a passion (I already did but I hate him even more now) and I wished that chapter 7 had lasted for ever, I never wanted to stop reading. Your writing is so intense and fiery and real, more than anything, and you are a very talented writer.
I'm hooked, simply put.
person the earth guide
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Yet another beautifully written chapter! You are quite amazing in capturing that intense moment in emotional experiences where it's almost like time doesn't exist. Like that pause right before the rollar coaster goes over the the top of the hill and drops. Lovely!
person Denise
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been following the story since the first time you posted it and found it really good. I have to say I very seldom write reviews for most of the fanfiction I read but I just had to write one after reading Chapte 7 - THAT was INTENSE. I absolutely loved every micro second I spent reading it. Thats gonna go down as one of the most memorable HP Fanfiction I've read - right up there with Cassie Claires! Expecting more greatness. Keep writing, if I had half the talent you guys do I'd be floating in heaven. Hope to see more updates soon.
person draco_my_god
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
OMG! That was one of the best story's that i have ever read. i mean wow. You have to update fast. I cant' wait. Love the way they hate each other but like always theres a thin line between hatred and love or just feelings. You could not have caught draco's character any better.
person Gracie
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I have ever felt as depressed as I did when I saw that chapter 7 was the last posted chapter. My heart just stopped beating for a little bit and I died a painful death only to be brought back to life in a world where there are only 7 chapters to this story.

But seriously. Holy heavens. This is my favorite HG/DM fic ever. Hands down. Amazing. I wish I was a poet because then I might have a better chance at explaining how amazing this story is. It's beautiful. Thank you for writing it.

You're not American, are you? I noticed that you spelt "realise" with an "s" instead of a "z" and you spelt "favour" with the "u". I'm Canadian so that is how we spell those words...we use "s" instead of "z" and add a "u" in colour, neighbour, behaviour etc. Anyways, I think that's cool.
person Know-it-all
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..... I feel like I got the crap beat out of me! A good chapter, but I really wanted more to go on between Hermione and Draco. I guess that'll have to wait until next time, yes? Harry was quite frightning, but totally believable. He can get very carried away. Bravo for the quick update! Keep up the good work.
person Rhapsody
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous! I absolutely love the way you portray Crazy!Draco. It's so real, this entire chapter was in fact. Your writing has grabbed me from the first word and kept me hooked. I can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks.
person Dyien
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this is deep dude, deeper than ur typical fanfic. nice one wit draco and his dad there, really original. ;) i want more!!