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ooooh please update soon...i hate rushing you but im checking like every minute.....can u atleast post sth saying when you'll update ? thnx

I can't breathe. I can't fucking breathe. I've never known, read, listened to an author who writes such dramatic... in the moment, damn, i can't even describe it. But emotions are flowing everywhere and it's so thick I can breathe it in and it's wonderful. Refreshing. Gut tearing wonderful. I love how they hate but they dare to do anything and Draco doesn't want to feel this way and he has it worse than anyone else. And beautiful. You're amazing. <33KC

I really enjoyed this, the sexual tension, the realisation that there actually might be something there between them besides hate and the acknowledgement of feelings that both boys have that Hermione is totally clueless about. I can't wait to read more. I hope you update soon.

Firstly, pardon to the author for wasting a review; however, I felt compelled to defend myself to an ignorant person encountered in this review board. Please don't waste your time reading this, kissherdraco, because I fear it's not a review, but a response to someone else.

Excuse me milkie, I thought that the author was asking for constructive criticism, but apparently I was wrong. According to you, I should just keep my big fat mouth shut because "this isn't class" and no one cares about a few mistakes, etc. However, as a writer, I find that it is helpful to both be complimented on the good parts of my writing, and learn what parts should perhaps be better. And honestly, it's quite inconsiderate of you to fill half of your review with a response to my constructive criticism (by the way, if I really wanted to "diss" her fanfiction, you really would have been able to tell). If you've got something to say, say it to me, don't waste someone else's time. My email is ea959@yahoo.com. And I happen to think that the author is writing a fabulous story, but I did see some things that could make it even better. That's what posting one's work is about; it's about subjecting it to the opinions of other people. Even if I was horribly rude to the author, it's still the risk she took by putting her work out there.

I go out of my way to not be offensive when I review stories I'm a fan of, because, of course, I want to see them continue. But, please, milkie, forgive this insolent reader for trying to make the world of D/Hr fiction a more pleasurable read. God forbid a rabid person like you with no respect for other opinions, and possibly without the capacity to understand the idea of improving something good, should spend half a review wasting an authors time and attacking me.

I apologize again, kissherdraco, for wasting this review on another reviewer. I have nothing further to say to milkie on the matter of my reviews. If you wish not to hear from me again, simply email me, my address ea959@yahoo.com.

That's one of the best fanfiction stories I've ever read - truly. It only seems that Hermione is a bit OOC - for the amount of the bad language she is casually using.
I'd rather say other characters are a trifle OOC too - for the same fucking reason ;-)

um no offense but Tanny who really cares! this isn't class i find myself so drawn into the story i don't even notice if there was mistakes what are you like looking to make someone who has wrote a great story feel stupid by rubbing little mistakes in their face you could just say 'hey you might want to go back over it real quick because there was letters left out of some words just thought you'd want to know', if you want to be her beta email her! don't go dissin' her on something that didn't need be, i know you said some good things but wow and if a character is intense it 'was' probably intended by the author what would make someone think otherwise? 'oh by the way i don't think that you meant to make your main character crazy' although that the point isn't it?, it's their fic not yours so they can write anything or anyone the way they want! boy you just can't make everyone happy can you?! there is noting about this story that should be changed! ------ sorry back to the lovely author, i don't think you need a beta some betas are good but a few try to take over the story and it's annoying. everything is so great, really it is this story is so much fun to read and that's what it's all about!!!!! it doesn't matter if it would really happen or not as long as you enjoy reading it and i do! this story is a real gem! keep it up and update when the next chapter makes you feel like thee is nothing that could make it any better! well unless you're to hard on yourself then update when you are finished with it lol =D

ur story kicks ass!! mind emailing as soon as u update? thanks!!!

fuckin brilliant! :) loved every word of it, and i can't wait til the next time you update... intense. really intense.

I love this story! Its beautifully written and a pleasure to read so thankyou.
I can't wait for the next chapter.

awesome fucking story but u should make it go fasterrrrrrrrrrrrrr