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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is fiona but i changed my name cause i noticed that there is another one running around on here so... anyway what a great chapter it was so moving and very much worth the wait i loved it and can't wait for my eyes to feast themselves on your next chapter!!!!
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh goodness. That was utterly brilliant. The entire time I was thinking "This can't end like this, something will happen." And it did. He cared. It was perfect. I want to see how he will continue with this knowledge. Excellent chapter. Absolutely beautiful. I loved it! And I can't wait for the next chapter.
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I can finally breathe! LOL ahhh I must have held my breath through that whole chapter. What intensity! Gods! I loved it. Absolutely loved it!!!! Draco is falling so hard, it's wonderful. Not sure about Hermione, though. I think she's definately in lust, but it may be hard for her to love him so quickly... especially the way he's always treated her. Oh, this is such good stuff. Such emotional prose. Thank you for this update! You're terrific.
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
0_0 WoooooooW!!!! That was an AMAZING chapter!!! I can see the relationship starting to build up!!:D
Keep up the FANTAsTic WORK!
Keep up the FANTAsTic WORK!
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Some small grammatical omissions, but I suspect that it happened in the heat of the writing. You do have the language of teenaged angst down quite nicely. Cheers!
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGAWDDD.. HAHAHAHA... DAT WUZZ SOOO CLOSEE!! LOL.. HAHAA.. U REALLY NEED TO UPDATEEE...
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaahhh! ::Stares at the missing "Next Chapter":: O.O ...why isn't there more?! Please write more this is really good! And highly amusing at that...But yes. Must have more...peaaase? Verygoodverygood. Later!
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aweee....still no update :(...im like hitting up your pg man
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love every word that you spill on your screen. It is exactly like their relationship would look like. No oocness, I love you for that! Update faster, I BEG you!!!! This story gives me the creeps AND makes adrenaline rush through my vains.
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have my attention!
Seriously...good work.I'm liking it. It's naughty, it's very readable, and I should very much like to know what happens next!
Seriously...good work.I'm liking it. It's naughty, it's very readable, and I should very much like to know what happens next!