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by kissherdraco

person Anon
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you wouldn't believe the party i threw when you updated. here:

that was a mental dish of caviar and a large glass of champagne!! and of course, back to the writing, it was superb as usual. MORE!!
person Christina
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, Draco is finally getting a heart. I love the heated scenes between him and Hermione. Great chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
person Bridge
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So I was leaving in ten minutes and checked to see if you updated and you had. I was forced to wait for three hours before I could read the next chapter, but it was well worth it. I read the liveJournal in order to tie myself over. I love this fic, it is beyond owrds. As I was reading that last scene I was so tense, and involved with the story, I really cared what would happen. I love your Draco and how he can't beleive he cares. You writing style works really well for your story, and traditional essay writing and story writing are two completly different things. All and all I am amazed, I hope you contiune writing this story, and throughout the rest of yoru life, you are really talented.

person Anon
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter
person mistress meo
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. Abso-fucking-lutely brilliant. So much angst, so much hate and disgust. I love their internal diaouge as much as I do their lines to each other. Keep up the fantastic work. I started reading this the first day you posted and have been looking for new chapters everyday since then. I only just had the time to review now. Please, keep updating this story. It's my guilty pleasure before I go to bed each night.
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That ending left me completely speechless- so much build up and then he does something you'd never expect and I loved it! I really liked the parallel between them over how much their head girl and boy posistions meant to them- they're more alike than they think. The long chapters are also a blessing- it's so nice to see an update and know that there'll be plenty there to read.
person hanna
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOD that is so... i cant belive it... he ... and... didnt "-faints-" OMG, so fuckin AWSOME pls update soon
person Janus
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa...um...holy shit. This story is insanly, brutaly tense. I had to keep walking away for awhile and then come back to read it. It is unbelievably wonderful and at the same time, terrifying.
person tressesinthewind
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet Mother of Merlin! Fuck that was some of the fuckin hottest shit I've seen with this pairing in a long time. I'm so fucking glad they stopped because that just makes it seem more real and more perfect. You fucking rock! I can't wait for more!
person Stacy
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was soo good!
Ah... I was so frusteratred,lol.
I love how you had the tension bulid up gradually, and thanks for writing a super-long chapter!!!
-Stacy