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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm normally not very much on to angst and I have to admit sometimes all this self flagelation tires me a bit. But it's a very very good fic indeed. It's so good even if I don't like the genre I kept reading without stop. The UST is so dense you can chew it and i just LOVE that. My favourite part was that first and tortured first kiss. It expressed so much I was almost without breath. Very very good fic indeed.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I kove your story. It's bloody amazing. I feel like if something like this happened. THIS is how it would be. Please dont leaveme hanging too long.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think that is the best love scene ever. i luved it! omg. that was amazing. amazing.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am amazed... I am only on chapter five but this is really gripping my heart. I am being completely serious. I have read so many, many Dr/H-fics but none like this. It's so intense. And so real.
And it hit me, in the first chapter somewhere, that I've been so blinded by all the other fics I've read - THIS is how things would really transpire between them. Maybe it would even be worse.
I can feel everything your characters are feeling. Vividly, and painfully. More than once I've felt the sting of tears in my eyes and my throat has felt thick from halfway into chapter one.
Really, really good job. Fantastic.
And it hit me, in the first chapter somewhere, that I've been so blinded by all the other fics I've read - THIS is how things would really transpire between them. Maybe it would even be worse.
I can feel everything your characters are feeling. Vividly, and painfully. More than once I've felt the sting of tears in my eyes and my throat has felt thick from halfway into chapter one.
Really, really good job. Fantastic.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was such a powerful chapter, words fail me. I don't know what to say but "wow".
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's mean, so fucking mean. How dare yew leave it at a cliff hanger like that?
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow that chapter was INTENSE!! I love how they are both attracted to each other and it's tearing each other apart. Draco finally got what he wanted but after the revelation he didn't follow though leaving a poor Hermione thinking it was all a trick to get back at her. These two need to have a good sit down to understand each other better and each others feelings. FANTASTIC chapter, hope you update soon because god I need to know what happens in the Aftermath of all this.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome! she should off herself that might help lol and he should hear her and it would be so much torchure(sp?) for him to hear her in the shower and there was nothing he could do to help her or himself in that moment that would be so much fun to read but i bet whatever you come up with will be great because this was! please please update soon this is so ... breathtaking!
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! this is your best chapter yet!!!! hurry up and review!!!! hurry!!!! i can't breathe until i have read the next chapter!!!
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Think you just won the award for sex scene of the century....! Brilliant and fabulous....may Chapter nine cometh soon!