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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, thats just intense. I loved it~
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This keeps getting better and better. I'm completely with your characters every step of the way, and even when the action gets frenetic the stream of consciousness is still vibrant and easy to follow and very emotional. I'm very much in awe of your talent. I can't wait to see where you end up taking this - I have every faith in you that your ending will be satisfying, whatever happens.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Better than I could've hoped for...What more can I say? Made my night to read this latest chapter. You rule.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa that was ridiculously hot
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter :D....can't wait for more :P UpdaTe plzzzz :D
But honestly this chapter was the best. i didn't know but i was holding onto my breath and my heart was racing...:D so embrassed but i thought i should tell you that ur story makes me believe in in :D
But honestly this chapter was the best. i didn't know but i was holding onto my breath and my heart was racing...:D so embrassed but i thought i should tell you that ur story makes me believe in in :D
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There are no words to describe the agony you have put me through in this chapter!! And even though I am supremely ticked at how the chapter ended, I completely understand. It wouldn't have been nearly as exciting.... But it did make me want to go jump off a cliff. The way you wrote the sex scene was so amazlingly hot! And I thought the kissing scenes were good. Phew! Many of your readers are going to need cold showers after this..
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wrote a quick comment at Dramione last night, but I just re-read the last chapter and I gotta say it was really beautifully done. I can't wait to read more.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah, that was intense. What a combination of complicated emotion. Well done!
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven't been able to read any other fanfic because of this one. You're that good.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it!!! gosh i just love it so much i'm at a loss for words. your story is sooo wonderful that even if i wanted to change anything i wouldn't know what to suggest. but please please please don't let her lose her virginity to someone else beside him! i would cried if you let that happen. things are just getting so good its addictive. you are doing such a great job with this one, i hope that after this one, you will continue to write more fics. i'll be waiting for the next chapter so hurry!