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by kissherdraco

person gabriela
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i need a cold shower...and my vibrator.

amazing story. though could you have produced MORE of a tease? bravo!!!
person nina
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was beautiful!!!!!!! Please Post More Sooon!!!!!!!!
person Alice
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how this is going.
And I am absolutely craving your fic now.
You've got so many people hooked.
person Kewlpoohgirl
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AH!! great chapter! :D I really think though that harry's character in your story more suits how ron really is in the books but it's your story so I'll just go with the flow. =) Other than that I'm still crazy about your story. It's so great Draco didnt continue but heart-wrenching all the same. Can't wait for another chapter. Keep up the good work
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want to cry after that ending, Thats so mean! Not just for Draco and Hermione but for us, the readers! This means so much angs...

Love it, Love it!

Update asap!
person Jo
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa...that was so incredibly intense. I swear like jaw droppingly intense...
person unknown
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats just good....no words...hands down
person Jump
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The scene where Hermione's crying is really heartbreaking! And whats wrong with Draco anyway? After wanting to fuck her so badly he can't now. So crazy, can't wait for the rest (but i will be patient) great job with this fic and I love how Ron's trying to deal with this.
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a place to leave us readers at. The tension was getting almsot unbearable, at boiling point, and so when they finally acted on their feelings I almost cheered out loud. And an excellent way to finish it, Draco finally getting a sense of morality and not being able to go through with the act. Once again, written beautifully in the way that it just slides easily in and out of one persons thoughts to another. Looking forward to an update!
person Sunny
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh My WOW!!!!!! That was incredible!!!! You are an amazing writer...I was on the edge of my seat throughout the entire chapter I swear!!!!! You need to update soon!!!! I love your story....pleae please please update soon!!!