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Wow, That was really amazing! Nicely worded foreplay. I really adore your story, I've been neglecting my X-mas party guests because of you. But I suppose it's fair, if we've been ruining your nights you have every right to ruin my social life. One thing I will say is that, and please don't take this personal, and I know that's really hard, but I felt like in the beginning of chapter eight you were a little heavy handed on the...big words. You had a bunch of really stunning imagrey, that was really great in conveing the tone and feelings of the characters but I felt like they kinda got lost amongst eachother. But I really love your story and if my comments make you feel like not writing, please disregard them for I am a crazy person. I really liked the violence and hatred that you put in to the "sex scene," because you are really being true to the characters, perhaps a tad more intense than how we got introduced to them, but you've already owned up to that. And frankly, I like that, it feels like you've lifted the veil of the "children's(I know it's not just for kids)" book and given us a picture of what a real co-ed boarding school out in the middle of nowhere would be like. Brava!

Oh WOW!!! What a brilliant story. Please update soon.

Oh my gosh. I haven't reviewed this whole story but I have to now. This is great(great being an understatment). I mean this is frigging awesome I can't imagine how you can end this. I feel so sad about the Trio how will they end up? But I want Draco to be happy(can I say happy)Well please just update again soon.I 've got to remember to check this story.

Holy fucking shit. That was amazing. I feel like I've been through the emotional ringer and I'm just reading the story. I can't even begin to comment on your work its so good. You must update though. After a chapter like that, you have to update immediately. Wow. I think my brain just exploded a little.

Wow! This is possibly the best fanfic I've ever read! I've made it to chapter 5 so far, and I would have reviewed sooner, but you've left me speechless!

This is so intense and consuming, and I love it! You won't hear me complaining about that.

The tension has been building up through the first 4 chapters... I read the first 3 chapters in one go, and then I just couldn't take any more!! I loved the scene in chapter 5, where they "tried to talk about it" because it sort of worked as a release for this tension, and you even worked some humour into it, which I think is awesome.

I probably won't be able to read more of your wonderful story before next year, but I will definitely be back to read more by then!

Keep up the wonderful writing! You are a truly gifted writer... you have your very own style of writing, and I wouldn't call it messy (it hasn't confused me or left me wondering want you meant with this or that at any point in the story so far), I would call it poetic!

Best of luck!

Leonora

This story is so wonderful, I barely even know what to say. I love the way you do dialogue and the sort of stream of consciousness thoughts of the characters. The thought processes and actions of your characters really make a lot of sense. This story is absolutely fabulous in every way. I particularly liked chapter 8 and the way it ended. I cannot wait for you to update. Your story has honestly made my day. I've read some really good fics, but I have to say that I've never enjoyed one as much as I'm enjoying this one. Much love!

Wow...wow, wow, wow. I'm speechless. This fic is an amazing piece of writing. I love the way you convey what the characters are feeling in a sort of disjointed way that it makes you feel that you are there in their mind, feeling it as they are. And that last chapter - awesome. I don't know what else to say other than PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! This is one fic that i will definately be following closely :)

Absolutely fantastic. There's nothing more. Just that. I love the angst, the violence and the way both of them interacts with each other. Because it's how I think they would really be had they'd been Heads. Could you email me when you update?

Cheers!

Hey! Still got that amazing touch, eh? Lol, the story get even better the more I read. Draco's amazing, no ooc at all. Same with Hermione. Harry's great too. He's the way I would imagine him to be by 7th year, what with the fucked up life he's led. Keep up the fantastical work, dearie!

Wow! I LIKED IT SO MUCH! It was wonderful! And this is not the end now is it? I want more! It is awesome!