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I know this is a throw back to Chapter 8, but I like the disconnected writing. I think it adds to the emotion and really makes you feel what the characters are feeling. It gives the feeling of being in the middle of friggin whirlpool of emotion and I love it. However, I like how you balance it out by writing a chapter like 9 where it is less frenzied and more of a drained, resigned tone. Cause lets face it, no one can withstand that much emotional turmoil without spontaneously combusting. So, I think you're writing style is perfect pretty much and I just wanted to let you know. Great Chapter 9 by the way (as if you couldn't figure that out already) I basically went into caradiac arrest I was so happy to see you updated...But I'm back into normal functioning heart rhythms, and am eagerly awaiting your next chapter.

OHHHH i just sped read this so i only got half of it but DAMNIT!!!!!! Ohh ohh ohhh *bounces* going to read this again cause damnit this is so freakin OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

unbelievable. this is just the best thing out there right now. i was telling all my fans in the alias forums about this fic. i checked all weekend for an update and what a page i got. very nicely done. i must say that i like your ron. he is a good friend but not a complete ninny in this one. draco running after her in the hallway was so great. he has fallen so much, changed so much from the beginning. that he will run after her just to see her, hear her.

so she thinks it's over huh? i'm with draco on this. it's far from over. things like that just don't go away and i can't wait for them to come back!!

update soon. PLEASE

~Sara~

holy crap. that was phenominal. another great chapter. that was wonderful. update soon!

Woah...I mean this is realli realli realli good! You're doing excellent job! I have been reading this story for a while but this is best chapter in the story so far. I love it. There is so much emotion in this chapter. I really hope that Hermione realizes that she is wrong...and does Draco love Hermione.?..because I'm getting the idea...your doing an great job...keep up the excellent work. I can't wait until the next chapter. <3

Wow ... Patiently waiting next chapter!! :D

OOooOOooOOH another great chapter =) Loved the ending conversation that Draco and Hermione have. I like that Draco makes clear well sort of that he isnt telling her he loves her just that you can't end it suddenly. I really like that you wrote how neither of them can just end it by saying it's over. =D Can't wait for another chapter so update fast. I love that your chapters are so long too. Makes the wait worth it.

me again. ah....i love this story. i waited for what seem like forever for this chapter to come out. i don't want to change anything but its so damn great there's nothing i would want to change. all i want is for you to continue and hurry up with the chapters and keep them coming as great as all the rest!

After reading your note and you saying that it was mostly just a plot building chapter and that you didn't like it i was kind of expecting it to be....well basically I was going in with the expectation that it would be nothing special (not sure why though, cause all of your chapters have been amazing) but I was pleasantly surprised!!

This chapter was REALLY REALLY good, I am not at all disappointed. Honestly I don

Oh My God! I am so in love with this story. I loved all the different emotions in this chapter. I hate angst but I secretly crave it, so please update soon as in really soon?