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Tres bien. It's late, but I've been meaning to read the update for days, and have only just gotten around to it, so you'll have to forgive me for my short-windedness (or be thankful for it, whichever you prefer ^_^). I really have to commend you for the emotion you convey in your story, because the more you write, the more real it becomes. Your characters aren't doing a bunch of crazy things without the reason clicking for the readers, and when a character does make a sporadic action, it's still a logical one for that person at that time.

A few grammar/spelling mistakes, but none too bad. The only one that I really paid much mind to was you used "their" when you meant "there." A few other simple typos, but that's about all. I'm still loving your writing style, it helps to keep the story moving and exciting even through the long "talking/explanation" bits of story.

You have a wonderful way of showing human thought in writing. It's quite magical how you do this, and it is something I hope you don't ever lose, because it is refreshing, as well as attention-grabbing, to feel as if you are reading the thoughts of characters in a story, as they think them.

I also like how you've realized the next step of Draco and Hermione's relationship is far above what they have experienced so far. It's also nice how you make sure neither of them have any idea where their relationship is headed, simply because it's such an odd one. Hehehe, it's all so deviously exciting!

I want to tell you that you did an excellent job with Dumbledore. Usually when fanfiction writers have Dumbledore speak, it reads nothing like how he speaks in the books. However, when reading what your Dumbledore had to say, I couldn't help but feel as though he was saying things JK would have him say. I especially loved how he had an "unfortunate knack for impromptu meetings." TRES, tres bien.

Well I'm off. Must work in 5 hours.

damn fanfiction, it shall be the death of my beauty sleep.

Lovely new chapter! I particularly liked this one. It seemed like a nice transition between a lot of the anger and now into some of the loving! Yay! It was brilliant and totally believable. Moving along at a nice pace! Keep up the good work!

I can not wait for the next chapter!

oh gods, i read the entire story straight through and right now it's 4:56 AM and i just finished and all i can say to myself now is..."oh gods please don't let it end there"

oh wow... so many words can describe how im feeling right now.. but only one can truly fit: amazing... i cant believe the power that radiated off all of those words... it was beautiful.. i cryed, im not trying to be cute (like those weird ass crack-heads that say (Oh! how cute;D)) it was very powerful.. you probably have a whole grip of reveiws to read but i do hope you get to read mine and that u understand how well you write... i am inspired to be a writer and i came to this website looking for other writers-in-progress and how well they write, and you write really well its almost scary. what country are you from? England i presume. well if you can write me back, i would like some advice and your choice of words and dialoge and plot and setting... almost everything. lol well good luck on your other stories. i hope they are as good as this one.

OMG, I've been on the verge of tears reading this story. There's just so much emotion in it. I can see things totally happening this way. It's very real and very sad. Please continue!! I'm dying here!! Write more :)

Once again you have left me emotionally exhausted. The way you write just pulls you in and it's like you experience all of the characters feelings personally. Hermione is just so broken and Draco so helpless and confused. I love how you have been portraying Ron, it's refreshing to see him written as more than the ignorant best friend. Anyway, please update soon, i can't wait to see how things progress!

*sigh* I don't know what to say. Your writing floors me. I think you do some of your most brilliant work during the wee hours of the morning. I know it's a strain to stay up so late pouring the essence of three hearts out onto the page (yours, Draco's and Hermione's), but your brilliant at it. So angsty, so emotional, so glorious. I check everyday for an update, please don't keep us waiting too long for chapter 10.

I can't even say any words on how fucking amazing this story is. This is going to be fatal. Taste that way. And I like it. <3KC

Much anticipated chapter... and it was so much more than I expected..!