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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I adore your writing. It's poignantly, breathtakingly beautiful.
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you know, the human body can only live three days without water. it's been much longer than that since you updated. =)
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was really really good. I could stop reading it had me on the edge of my chair. (^_~)
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, awsome as always, but I do have a question!
Even though it has only been, like 3 days, since the incident with Hermione, is Draco so humping other girls, or is he so frustrated that, he isn't working properly?
Other than that, awsome awsome awsome.
I love it, it's amazing, and I am begging you to update soon!
Siobhan!
Even though it has only been, like 3 days, since the incident with Hermione, is Draco so humping other girls, or is he so frustrated that, he isn't working properly?
Other than that, awsome awsome awsome.
I love it, it's amazing, and I am begging you to update soon!
Siobhan!
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The first time I read it, I read 1-6 and I didn't like it. I don't remember what I didn't like, but I didn't like it.
After reading all of it again, I realize how wrong I was.
Water is so intense and moves like a rollercoaster. It's so frenzied and fast and as you put it "so fucked up". It's raw, emotive and powerful. You're right, it is all fucked up, but it's something beautiful. Your prose mirrors their relationship, beautiful and dark at the same time. You have a great deal of talent.
There's a little thread, a facade of sanity, of stability keeping everything together, and it's tangible. You can see it, feel it, and you can sense the chaos lying beneath it.
I love the counterpoint and Ron. With Ron, we see what's "normal", with Hermione and Draco we see the extremes; we see something so wrong and twisted.
I adore how you pushed Hermione's morals aside. You developed it, made it believable and work. Draco is much deeper and much darker character, and you write him so well. You've made all the characters your own- and that is what makes truly GREAT fanfiction. Brava.
The last chapter was... WOW, your best so far. There are no words to describe what it was. It was so emotional- you can't help but hate and love Draco and you can't help wanting to feel sorry and slap Hermione.
Please, email me when you update.
Thank you for writing and sharing something so brilliant!
After reading all of it again, I realize how wrong I was.
Water is so intense and moves like a rollercoaster. It's so frenzied and fast and as you put it "so fucked up". It's raw, emotive and powerful. You're right, it is all fucked up, but it's something beautiful. Your prose mirrors their relationship, beautiful and dark at the same time. You have a great deal of talent.
There's a little thread, a facade of sanity, of stability keeping everything together, and it's tangible. You can see it, feel it, and you can sense the chaos lying beneath it.
I love the counterpoint and Ron. With Ron, we see what's "normal", with Hermione and Draco we see the extremes; we see something so wrong and twisted.
I adore how you pushed Hermione's morals aside. You developed it, made it believable and work. Draco is much deeper and much darker character, and you write him so well. You've made all the characters your own- and that is what makes truly GREAT fanfiction. Brava.
The last chapter was... WOW, your best so far. There are no words to describe what it was. It was so emotional- you can't help but hate and love Draco and you can't help wanting to feel sorry and slap Hermione.
Please, email me when you update.
Thank you for writing and sharing something so brilliant!
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your raw, passionate writing has captivated me. I think with a beta you would be PHENOMENAL! I await your updates with bated breath.
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
three suggestions.
1. cut back on the language--you use a LOT and it's really not necessary. the f-word's in there every paragraph, and it's distracting when you're trying to focus on the quality of your excellent work. :)
2. SMUT!!!! but obviously not too soon, because draco is still somewhat of a mental case.
3. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1. cut back on the language--you use a LOT and it's really not necessary. the f-word's in there every paragraph, and it's distracting when you're trying to focus on the quality of your excellent work. :)
2. SMUT!!!! but obviously not too soon, because draco is still somewhat of a mental case.
3. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Gawd.
This is one of the best fan fic's I've ever read. Please update soon.
Spaz
This is one of the best fan fic's I've ever read. Please update soon.
Spaz
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. I actually read the fist nine chapters last night untill 3:30 am becuase it was soo good I couldn't stop! Just to get it out of the way, the only thing i didn't like was the quick changes of point of view in the middle of the scene, it's hard to decipher whose thoughs you're reading with all the tension. This was just soo full of angnst and drama and emotion it just engulfed me and i was captured by the story. Amazing, brilliant, i really don't have the adjective to properly praise this fic and you for writting. Please don't stop, you're too talented and this was too amazing to never be resolved.