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Powerful chapter!

Wow! This is simply incredible, perfect, and amazingly hot. I love your story! It's so intense that I can't even gather myself to review just after reading a chapter, I need some time to gather my thoughts. And even now I don't know what to say, because it's as if words are not enough to describe how amazing this story is!

You just continue writing at whatever pace you want... as long as you write chapters as amazing as these!

I know that you say in your author's notes that you're not happy with your chapters, but I guess you just have to go with your instinct, and write whatever you feel is right, because your work is truly amazing.

I wish you the best of luck with your writing, and I'll definitely be looking forward to chapter 11.

Love Leonora.

Can't wait for the ball because it means Hermione can't run away which hopefully means their VERY well needed talk.

Yay, so glad to see that you updated!
Your story is one of the few that always holds my interest,
it's always interesting and never boring.
Ooh, i can't wait to read what happens at the ball =) Keep up
the amazing work! ^^

closing on a week since updated!!! ahhh can u tell im desperate?

Yes, email me. Two spelling errors..."that" for "than" in the exhange regarding Ron, and a "their" for "there" further down. It's hard to be more exact, as this window doesn't minimize. Other than that, well done, looking for more, cheers!

I always watch the scrolling thingy with a mixture of elation and later dread as the marker sinks lower and lower. I loved this chapter it was nice and long, and furthered the plot, which is one of the reasons I adore your story so much. One-shots are fun and have their place, and don't get me wrong I love them too. But sometimes one just needs some character depth and plot development. Don't think that means you can get away without the sexy stuff. But you shouldn't apologize for having a chapter about the plot, it was needed and beyond that it was a great chapter. I liked the conversation with Ron and Herm's reactions seemed realistic, not only to Ron but to the situation. (Girl, needs some anti-depressants. STAT.) I used to think sure there's away this can end happily, but I'm honestly beginning to wonder. I hope you don't go for the ending that seems most popular amongst Draco/Herm relationship stories, where they both die in the end. Anyway, I loved this chapter and I cannot wait for chapter ten.

awe still no update

i'm outrageously addicted to this. update soon.

I'm stunned. This is amazing. I love the way you let the tension between Hermione and Draco slowly build up until it reached that point of utter devastation. They're both so beautiful in this confused, hurt and broken state. And please, please tell me that this is a WIP and that this is not the end!
There's so much mising still! Ron has to find out, he's so wonderfully mature and understanding *loves* and Harry has to admit to someone -anyone- that he loves Hermione more than a best friend, as family. And where did that Ball go to?
So, please keep on writing! Your story kept me awake until three in the morning, I just couldn't stop reading!