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by kissherdraco

person jadziadaxx
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wowee! Man oh man, I just can't take the intensity anymore, please, though, keep it coming. What a great writer you are!
person DAM
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow.. this story keeps getting better and better. I also would like to say that you're writing has greatly improved since the first chapter... I much prefer this new, more professional, writing style where sentences are punctuated and the words don't slur together. I also love the intensity of Draco's character, and literally can't wait to see him snap. I can't believe he held out for most of the chapter. I must say, I also enjoy the fact that Hermione continues to hold out against him. I'm curious to see more interaction between Harry and Hermione... I like the fact that he is very protective of her. I'm looking forward to your next update... I check this site everyday to look for new chapters in this story, and thank you for posting so regularly.
person ash
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahh its so wonderful..I can't wait the story is great I can't wait until you update again..hehe
person Janus
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is like the ultimate mind fuck. My mind hurts after reading it. I don't mean this as a bad thing either, it is just so fucking intense that ... I can't even describe it. This is such an amazing story. Not very many writers have the balls to write a crazy, intense story but you are doing a fabulous job. I'm eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
person beetle juice
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is perhaps one of the most disturbing pieces l have ever had the pleasure to read! The obsession and hatred is palpable and is becoming quite a fabulous story! I love the way in which you have gone about the plot and characterisation, especially DM, whom in all honesty is somewhat seeminlgy insane, with a probable cause ofcourse. The role enacted by both HG and DM is perfect, imo. The tension present is indeed captivating and leaving me thirsting for more .. which l hope will be coming soon!!!! Update as fast as you can ... l NEED and WANT to know what happens next .. as the latter chapters prove to be more stupifying then the former, where the plot-thickens. I AM ABSOLUTELY IN LOVE WITH THIS FF!!!!! ^_^ This epic proves that you are a formidable writer and indeed have a fertile imagination! KEEP UP THE ASTOUNDING WORK!!! >_<
person southern cross
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so very very glad at the new update and i loved every word. what an evil cliffhanger but i hope that you update soon. as much as i like the angst it was nice to see draco's mask. a little of the old malfoy mixed in really showed how far he had fallen.

oh my and the scene on the balconey was so wonderful. dravo must stay on his kness through out the duration of the this fic. what a hot hot scene. well i would allow that he needs to be standing when he kicks the living shit out of those two skanky whores in that bathroom. God, he's gonna be pissed. and he's gonna make her all better right? not to mention get a bit of blood on his hands?

i cannot wait for more!
person Vicky
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Omg, I cannot WAIT for an update!! UGH I HATE Pansy!!

Let Draco be the Hero and then let Hermione see how much he really cares! Omg this story is like my crack.
person bluebear_74
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Of all the places one can end a chapter, you end it there?!?! Oh god now I'm going to be even more obsessively checking for updates.. more than I already do.

Fantastic chapter, I guess Draco kind of got his talk with Hermione, and well other "stuff" too. Let all hope that Draco doesn't take too long to find her, curious to what will happen when he does, assuming he does of course.
person Carol
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! I love it when they fight!!, Thanks, a very long chapter. Update soon! Can not wait to know what happens. Molfoy to the rescue!!
person Jo
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh!!! It is positively EVIL to stop there! Though the super long chapter was appreciated :D