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Ohs my goodnesses! This is like....my favorite Draco/Hermoine fic!! T_T And I only read the first seven chapters. I stopped myself because I was afraid that she would stop writing them...>_> But she hasn't...I still want to wait for the last one though! I recommend this fic to every D/H fan!! I can't wait till it's finished!......I can't wait till I suck it up and just read it. Screw being afraid of it not ever being finished....-weakly avoids at all costs again-

Another good chapter! =) Can't wait to see how Draco comes to the rescue so update soon! :D I'll be checking everyday lol.

I've been waiting for you to update with chapter 11 before I read chapter 10 because that would mean more story when I finally did read. But now I feel bad because you're not feeling motivated, don't drop this story pleeease. I just finished reading chapter 10, so I'll be reviewing again shortly, after I've read ch.11.

I really enjoyed this chapter, I liked that you managed to work in some smut, even if it wasn't the smut we were hoping for, it was still thirst quenching. I love the way you create pictures so vividly, I can imagine Draco and Herm on either side of her door in that last scene, wanting, and depressed, so very depressed. I really wish someone would illustrate some of your story, I would if I had any talent. And now for the suggestions, (candy-coated) It seems like you've kind of lost touch with the Draco you created earlier in the story, or at least certain aspects, like his need to be punished for misdeeds. I know he's evolving, and growing as a human being, but it seems like he got over the lessons learned from childhood too fast. Or that in such a state of tension those lessons would be the things he would fall back on. Plus, I wanna see Draco and Harry fight again. You're really good at writing fight scenes. I really liked that you kept Herm strong, I'm getting a little sick of heroines in stories today, saying "never again" on one breath and then "oh god yes" on the next. I know she has to cave sometime...she does cave, right? But it still nice to see her being in control of the relationship. Brava!

I didn't know how to review this. I'm actually speechless which is something that never happens. I don't know what to say except that the intensity actually had me on the edge of my seat. Each chapter keeps getting better and the build up is amazing. I don't see any OOC characteristics and if there they are so minimal it's difficult to pinpoint. You portray their inner struggles so well and everytime there's an encounter even if they don't touch or just exchange insults there's something so sensual about every look every word and thought. You've expressed their attraction/hatred so well I'm in awe. Well done and I will be checking everyday from now on for an update.

of all the effing cliffhangers. totally addicted to this, btdubs.

I hate you and I love you at the same time!! I can't believe that I'm gonna have to wait, what? Another week or so for another chapter??!! AGH!! How could you leave it at that??? What's gonna happen to Hermoine? If Draco saves her well then that's gonna look bad isn't it? And yet, he has to save her right? Because who else would??? AGH!!! I hate Pansy! I know that it isn't gonna be Draco as the knight and shining armor and Hermoine realizes that he cares for her and la-de-da b/c you don't write like that... Or do you?? I don't know what else could happen that would be beneficial in the development of their "relationship" They will have a relationship eventually, right??

Soooo glad I could finally get back on the site. Nasty hijacker made it almost impossible. Good story so far, again! Please email when updating. Excellent grammar, visuals, and you definitely do angst well. Cheers!

That was amazing. Truly great. But, man, what a cliffie. I'm very worried about hermione, I hope she is ok! (Violence upsets me.) Anyway, I sincerely hope that somehow Draco and Hermione will be able to get over all of their extraordinary painful and complicated issues and finally be able to be happy together. I would be so thrilled if that could happen. Life is full of unhappy endings, so I think it's cool when we get to read about happy ones in fiction.

This story is amazing. Your writing skills are probably the best that I've come across in a long time. Another reviewer commented that reading this story is in a way exhausting. I have to agree because I think you've really managed to draw us into this story.

I hope that you'll be able to post another chapter soon bec where you've left off.... you're going to be the death of me!!

More please!!

EEk. I wonder what will happen next. Great chapter. Update soon. Later. K15