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first of all...this is one of the best stories I've read here on AFF and I'm only on chapter 5!!! I was kinda iffy at first because of the way you are portraying Harry and Ron...it's different from the ones I've read, usually Harry is the nice one and Ron is the one with the Hot temper...but I've decided that I like the way you did this! It's different than everyone else!!! Nice work! I cannot wait to see what happens next!

EF

Hot damn, girl. You are something fierce when it comes to writing. I was -enthralled- from the get go. I couldn't stop reading till I finished. And the ending! Spectacular! Wait...was that the ending? If it was, sublime! The perfect cherry on the top. You have some mad skills. I was just blown away. The way they reconciled at the end was picturesque. I want to read it again! Thank you!

This story is outstanding! Even made me late for work as I couldn't stop reading :) Please, please update soon. I love all the angst but the sweet ending to the last chapter was fantastic. I want this story to go on forever. Thank-you for writing it! x

please write moreee!! this story was so addicting and I couldn't stop reading it! What happens next??

you are a MASTER of diologue!

LOOOOOOOVVVVVEEEEEE this story ^_^ . loved it so much that I read all 21 chapters in a day and lets just say I didn't get much of my homework done >.> LOL. Update soon!!

Chapter 12
I think you captured their first time together beautifully. You're so right about how first time sexual encounters are rarely choreographed like a XXX movie. They were in the moment. They were both hurting. They grabbed a chance to drop their guards and any deviation or distraction could have caused the whole momen to disintegrate.

Although, I found myself wishing that he would pick her up and get her away from the glass. You know, maybe take her to his bed. But hey, I loved the chapter.

You have a very interesting, very poetic style of writing that I'm sure is very difficult to achieve. Thank you for taking the time to write this and share it with all of us.

You know, sometimes I got a little frustrated with the dynamic between Draco and Hermione because it just didn't seem like they had enough positive interactions to keep them interested in pursuing each other. And I

Oh my god.

I don't know if this review will go under chapters, but Chapter 8

Oh my god.

Brilliant.

How can you possibly write anything more after that? That was perfect.

Gnarg... Angst! Angst...makes...me...feel...squiggly... I really don't know what that's supposed to mean. But that's how I'm feeling. But in a good way. A) I usually avoid alternate pairings, because I usually can't get into them. B) I usually avoid love geometry, for the aforementioned squiggly feeling. C) I usually avoid long longfics because they tend to lose direction and/or let me down in terms of conclusion. In short, I am a very selective reader (Which is not supposed to impress you, just indicate that I am very impressed WITH you).

But in spite of these basic tenets of my fanfiction-faith, there is the rare piece of literature that is so well-written, so well-characterized, so thought-out, emotionally descriptive, and mindbendingly ~hot~, that I just can't get it out of my head. Really, all night at work last night I was looking forward to reading this when I got home.

Your writing is really something to look forward to, and please don't stop!