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What an amazing fic!!! Fuckin' awesome! Hermione has to shag Draco soon or ill go mad!!! You gonna be updating soon becuase i'm desperate to find out what happens next! Cat xxx

OH NO YOU DIDN'T!!! How could you leave us hanging like that!! I usually love a good cliffy, but you took it too far!! LOL I cannot wait to see where this ends up! Uodate this amazing story as soon as you can...for my sanity!! :) Great job...honestly, I love it!

OMG I can not wait for the next chapter!!!!

I don't think I've reviewed for the last couple of chapters and I must say I'm revolted with myself. I absolutely love this story. I think what draws me to it the most is that it really gets inside both Draco and Hermiones heads, it shows us what they're thinking and that I think is the demise of alot of the Dramione fics on here. That and the fact that they just fuck like rabits, authors seem to forget that they completely hate each other and that Draco has been brought up to be revolted by mudbloods. Keep up the good work. And don't worry, not all your readers are sexually frustrated with the smut/or lack there of, I personally think a story is better is the smut doesn't some till later. Smut to early in a story can ruin it. Keep up the good work, and update when you can.

Ok, I just read your author's note about all the cussing and I just had to comment. This is the first comment I have EVER given... bad, bad, bad of me I know. Anyway, my opinion, first off, is that you have this story posted on AFF.net! That right there should tell anyone what they need to know about the language and/or content of any of the fics here. If whoever it is that is complaining about the language doesn't like it, then they simply should just not read. And whoever it is that actually counted the amount of times you used the word "fuck," I have no choice but to think they have WAY too much time on their hands, and maybe instead of complaining, they should take up writing a story of their own. Until I read your note I honestly couldn't even tell that you cussed as much as it's claimed that you do. And trust me, I don't mind profanity, but one of my serious pet peeves is when it's used poorly and vulgarly, in stories and in the real world. Now, I have selfish reasons for commenting right now. My main reason is that if you decide to go back and edit, then it's gonna take even LONGER for the next chapter to come out, haha. I have been on the edge of my seat everyday since I first started reading your story, and am constantly checking for updates up to 3 times a day! This is one of the best and most captivating stories I have ever read! So please, please do not let the little nit-pickers (who have nothing better to do than be obnoxious) make you second guess yourself while writing this story. Everything that you do and write make this story unique and if you change any little thing, it just wouldn't be the same. Ok, well, sorry for this obscenly long review, but I just really wanted to try and squash the fears that you may be having, and motivate you into completing the next part. LoL, like I said, selfish reasons ;-). You are doing an extrordinary job and I cannot wait to see how this story develops.

To Mena: Oh, great and wise 'published' author, please forgive us ass kissing, masterbating, ignorant peons. We bow to your superior knowledge of all things that make a story enjoyable. Never again shall I read a piece of smut with taking out my bible and thumping it in the face of profanity. It is so kind of you to police the fictions on AAF for us, for we are not wise enough ourselves to judge a good piece of fiction.

i second that

O.K. I'm going to have my say about the word 'fuck' I think you should leave it in. Anyone who's heard a group of teenage boys talking to one another will know that every other word that comes out of their mouths is 'fuck' That is just reality. Anyone who's offended by the the word shouldn't be reading smut to begin with. There's a lot of rated G fictions on other sites to enjoy.

You're doing a beautiful job on this fiction and I really envy your writing style. I can imagine that you must enter the minds of those characters in order to write like you do and that takes a lot of concentration and energy. If you imagine the characters saying 'fuck', then let them say it. I use that word quite a bit in my fiction as well, because we are dealing with teens - and that's how they talk (for the most part). And there are times when 'fuck' is just fucking sexy. LOL

Keep up the wonderful and 'fucking' hot work. LOL There, I'll say it again. "Fuck! This fiction is good!"

I know it's been said already, but apparently the children don't seem to understand it: THIS IS AFF!!! If you're so offended go to a site that limits the stories to PG-13. I personally think it's believable to have all the cursing, considering the state of mind the characters are in - when I was seventeen I said the word fuck about 555 times a day(not really, but damn near, and you get the point)! If that's the way you see the characters behaving, then write it. As for the comments that it's out of character, this is FANON NOT CANON. I personallly thought the vocabulary brought a nice kind of edge to your writing that made it grittier, but, hey, that's just me...

Please update- I love it so far!