rate_review Reviews

i love this story and i hope u update soon!!

I've been up all night reading your story...
It's amazing, just blody amazing.

The way you write makes me feel,
deep within me, all the stuff they're going through...
al the hatred, passion, etc...
I felt it all.

You've left me aaalmost speechless,
'cause I really wanted to review your story.

I read that some people told you that the way you wrote was confising...
well, I think it's just fucking perfect. It gives the story a whole new level of... credibility,
reality...and, I don't know, it just get's to you so much more this way.
I trully loved your story.

I'm actually a H/H fan, yeah, shocker...
but yesterday I started reading a D/H fic,
and after one... I couldn't stop.
I mean, I always thought that the whole hate/love thing could work,
it works in almost every pairing... but actually reading a D/H,
it's just amazing... and this fic is incredible!
I read a few, and they were cute and all,
some very good. But not nearly as good as this fic.
The way their feelings are evolving it's just perfect...
simply and fucking perfect...



This is one of my longest review ever xD
I'm sorry if you got bored reading lol
Anyway... please update asap,
I really can't wait...

I'm going away for a while...
so, if you could pleeeease, pretty please
send me an email when you update...
it'd really make me happy,
you don't know how much.

take care
happy writting xD

bye

Oh, I forgot a few things...

First, sorry for any spelling or grammar mistakes...
I'm from Chile, and my birth language is of course, spanish.
Although I feel pretty confident writting in english,
I love it =P

And second...Mmmmm... I can't remember, so that's it xD

bye

:O
**gasps** as if u left it like dat?! I need to no wat happens lol. 4 all ur reader's sakes plz write more quickly! Ur wrk is Fab!

I love this story. The whole 'I hate you but I can't resist you' thing is my favourite kind of Hermione/Draco tale. I am eagerly awaiting their next bout of denial. Checking on you every day!

This story is crazy good-please update

This is an outstanding story - one of the most poignant and realistic stories I've read as far as the way they relate to each other.

I find it absolutely soulwrenching and I love that! Of course I want to beat him with a floor lamp for being such a racist moron, but it wouldn't be interesting otherwise, so yay you! And continue, I can't wait to read more. I hope it is in like four minutes.

This is pure greatness.

Wow...
I'm really fascinated with this story. I love the ansty obsession!
Now hurry up with the next chapter, lol!

They made you get rid of all the f words?? WHY??? Why did they make you waste your time re-writing something that was perfect to begin with when you could've been spending that time writing the new chapter???? I think the fuck words were totally appropriate!

After reading some of your reviews, I felt I needed to post an additional comment. I don't know you or your motivation for writing this story, but it is your story, therefore it's yours to do what you want with it. There is a lot of profanity, but I don't feel that it detracts from the story you're trying to tell. Also, it is clearly marked with an NC-17 rating, so adult subject matter (including profanity) was something I expected to see. Though I'm not a professional or published author, editor, or publisher, I find that if there's a good, strong story with well developed characters and an exciting plot, I concentrate on that rather than tallying up the amount of expletives I see. Besides, I'm rather desensitized to it. One of my favorite contemporary authors, Stephen King, uses a great deal of profanity, and it hasn't seemed to hurt his career, or his storytelling abilities one little bit. Good luck on your next chapter, I'll be looking for an update!