rate_review Reviews

After all those days of agonized waiting i can happily say that the ending was incredible, there was so much emotion going on i was completly hooked on every word. i sincerely hope you don't lose inspiration for this story because i love your writing, you have definetely become my favorite D/HG author, congratz! lol :)

What an overwhelmingly emotional chapter. My eyes started to water when you described Draco crying. And don't you worry! That Draco/Hermoine scene was perfect and unbelievably so. I enjoyed reading it because of the content and found that what each character felt was more important.

And it left a very strong impression on me.

You are an amazing writer. And don't ever forget that.

Magnificent chapter! This would have to be one of my favourite chapters so far because it

This story is fucking incredible. And this Draco Malfoy is exactly the type of character I imagine him to REALLY be. How you have unrooted his true persona and unmasked his past is fucking brilliant. I'm so in awe, so in love with this story that it's heart-wrenching to even think about it ever ending.

OMG...you trully are somethin'...
I loved this chapter, I think it was just perfect.
Pain was going to be a part of their first time, not just because of Hermione,
but because of who they are, together...
Those who never should've met,
who never should've seen,
who never should've touched.
It was just perfect.

I don't know what else to say.
I couldn't stop reading it...you write just so.. right
everything fits, every little word next to the other...every single detail.
Every word has it's purpose, every single word makes you feel something they're feeling
something you're feeling as you write, something we're feeling as we read.
'Cause that's one of your best qualities as a writer...
you really make us FEEL

not like we're inside the story,
but like the story is inside us,
within us...

like it's our story,
our life

and we have to do something about it
we have to feel it,
think about it,
live it.

Again, sorry for the long update...
But I just... I dunno, I really love the way you write.
It reminds me a little of the way I like and try to write...
(but you're so much better than me)

Take all the time you need
we all understand you have responsabilities...
a life to get back to, beyond this words,
this walls...

I shall return to that life soon.
I'm starting college on March, mi first year.
It's going to be long...
it's going to be hell...

So take care

bye!


Please let me know again by mail when you update again =)
'Cause I really can't check your lj everyday...
and checking it, and finding no updates
would be the death of me.

triana_titi@yahoo.es

like it cant wait to read more

update soon!!
your doing great!

Oh, it's kinda obvious
since I'm the only one that writes this way
but I'm Triana...
But I registered, so I'm Yukinon now =)

LOL, I love the review left by ANON regarding the 555 fucks. Very well said. Anyway, the raw feeling of this story is great!!! Go back to life and come back to us when you are yet again sane.

You've gotta finish this story, please, please, pleazzzzzzzzzzzzeeeeeeeeee!!!!
I'm almost desperate. Who am I kidding...... Desperate!!
Absolutely fucking brilliant.