rate_review Reviews

about all the language: several people have said that because this is aff.net, language is expected. and it is inside the rules. but my mom used to say, "just because you can does not mean you should." lots of language can tarnish the story and distract attention from your wonderful storyline and plot. that doesn't mean we don't expect draco to swear at all, because teen guys DO swear--it's reality--but it's also pretty certain that someone like hermione wouldn't swear that much, and draco doesn't need to swear as much as he does. the f-word is in every paragraph at least once! i love your story.

I guess I took too long writing that and I got logged out or something lol! I\'ve never posted a review as Anon before... not my style... >.<

brilliant.

AMAZING.

Awesomeness not a let down because pain is what this story has done so well

It is ridiculous how much I love this story. It's so beautifully painful. I just wish that they could have one moment of relief where they can see that it's not all bad. But I guess that would go against your plan. haha I can see how this story can be draining. So take your break and rest but come back soon! I actually look for this story. Excellent job.

amazing chapter. really... wow. and take a break if it's what you need, you sure deserve it! i'll still be here.

You are AMAZING!!! I love you and want to have your babies!!!!! (sry-jus tha fan grl in me comin out...!) But yeah...wow. That was (at the risk of sounding horribly corny) beautiful. So much emotion and hurt...I loved it! I love you!! YAY!

What a great story...I hold my breath while I read each chapter. Just my opinion...but I personally really don't mind the swearing, it adds to the angst of the story. Keep up the good work! :D

Omg so beautiful! The pain and the passion and the bit with the hands just...UGH, I hope the break isn't for too long!