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That chapter was AMAZING! Truly a fantastic piece of writing! The pain and the anguish and the bone-deep desperation was so...i can't even describe it, it was that good. I think it was the perfect first time for Draco and Hermione, only when they are both at their lowest would they allow themselves to let go and just be. I love this fic, like many have said i think it may just be the best i've ever read! I can understand why you need a break but please don't make it too long, i can't wait to see where you take WATER from here.

this is honestly one of the best D/Hr fics ive ever read. seriously. i love the way you write and i love the way you incorprate a perfect balance of angst and need. there were times when you get so involved in the story, you want to be part of it. please please please dont stop writing this and please update soon. ill be checking regularly for updates!

awesome! what a great transition chapter, now you can take this in any direction you want! i can't wait to see were it goes from here! good job on the first time it was perfect for this story! i love your take on the characters it's intense, i love it!

Wow! That chapter was just so fantastic! After reding one of them, I always think, man, that chapter was awesome everytime. But, seriously. I thought their first time was brilliant. Kind of erotic, but thats what made it all the better!

While reading this I was really dejected, beacause I thought it mwas the end of the story. Thank gosh it's not!

Deep breaths. Deep, deep breaths. I had to read it again. The ending. So powerful. So brilliantly written. So unbelievably passionate, hot. White hot. You're killing me slowly with every word you write. I don't even have words to say how wonderful this chapter is. I think I may need to completely re-read this story while you are on your break and honestly try and figure out which is your best chapter. Right now, I think this one is BY FAR your best and not just because this was the chapter where they finally did it. I really do wish my writing could even come close to what you put in this last chapter. The descriptives were amazing. I know you say you like my writing and believe me, I DO appreciate it. But my God, woman. Brilliant. My heart was clenching in its chest when Draco kept saying he was sorry and sobbing and totally losing it. Killing me. God, I love it. I fucking love it. I think I need a shower and then I think I need to read it again.

*sobbing* they have no one but each other, not really. beautiful.

WOW... DAT WUZZZ A GREATT LONGG CHAPPIEEE... I REALLLYYY LOVEE ITT...

Wow. This was intense.
I found myself getting wet eyes when Draco sat sobbing in the bathroom. All this pain and need and duties. Your way of describing it is moving and beautiful. (Though I stumble over your punctuation every now and then) I must say, I even understood Pansy - not that it makes her behaviour forgivable.
The sex was hot. Not really romantic, but that would have been totally out of place in this fic. I found it perfect, their raw need and feeling of belonging.

Get done what has to get done and then please write the next chapter!
I'll check your LJ
Thanks for posting, moonystone

.......breathe out.........i dont think i was breathing during ch12 ....holy shit........thats the best one yet......they just get better.......not just cuz they finally get together.......but everything was just great.....everything everyone....even pansy....so perfect.....dam woman.........i thot the situation was wonderfully done......they can do it better (without so much pain for herm later) but this first time (cuz therell be more rite? haha) was bloody brilliant.....BRILLIANT!

Fantastic, simply fantastic. I thought the sex scene was perfect for their situation, overwhelming emotions and that basic need for human comfort. Well done!!