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about harry\'s character.... very different from what I usually see authors choose to do in that you seem to have swapped the typical ron and harry personaiities. not a bad thing by far and it mixes it up some. that said, harry seems pretty far from being emotionally stable. something about everyone he cares for leaving him makes him that much more not only protecting but also demanding of hermione. at some point he needs to be able to look at the situation rationally and realize that hermione would only abandon him if he smothered her to the point where she had no other choice. I\'m also wondering if perhaps he\'s mistaking his possive nature for romantic feelings for her. He doesn\'t strike me as being particularly attracted to her and yet he seems desperate to keep anyone else from taking his place in hermione\'s life, which of course no one could ever do. I\'m just curios what it will take for him to realize all this or if he even ever will. great chapter and I could gush about it for pages but you wanted harry specific responses so there you go.

I have only one thing to say:

NEW CHAPTER NOW!!!!


I am loving this story. :D

Fantastic story so far, raw and emotional.

I don't know if this is real angst or just Draco's psycopath mind, 'cause, really, he's a bit scary in the latest chapters. I couldn't concentrate very well in this "first time" ... I was worrying too much of Hermione! I don't think a normal person could take that beating and a first time all in a anight but...anyways, the fic looks very interesting!
(I was wondering how a beating like that could happen in the school with no one noticing it.... )

SQUEE!!! Aw, can't wait til the next chapter, but I know all too well about taking time over updates so take your time with it so its the fab quality of the rest of them! 'Water' is just ace with the ups and down of the characters and emotion. Keep it up!
Lov Beki x x x

OMMGG! that was wonderfull!:D
really,fully..
I'm so addicted to it.. All this characteristic analysis are very very thrilling and pure understanable, PERFECT:D
their 'first time' so cool also;) Some parts were harsh but also
so tender,soft and melting. When Draco started to cry, somewhere in my heart aching painfully..
at the end of the episode you said;

'This isn

I HAVE to say it! FUCKING BRILLIANT !!! Update before I fall apart!

Let down? No fucking way in hell! That was probably the best Hermione/Draco first time I have ever read. It was so sweet! It was what I had expected and so much more. Great job. I'll be checking up often to see if you have updated!

~Katie :)

thank you for writing this. i don't know how else to put it.

Okay, needless to say, this is-

1) my favorite chapter of any story I've ever read
2) the best violent love scene ever
3) um, just plain awesome...!

No, I don't really like the heated loss-of-virginity scenes that many authors write about. This seems so much better. Seriously. Like, it's real passion. Maybe I'm a closet masochist or something, but the pain was necessary in between all of the emotional turgor happening.

You're such a descriptive writer, and I love it!