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by kissherdraco

person Anon
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhh please update soon! nearing the 20 day mark! im dyinnnnnnnnnnnnnng of need
person nadia
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...*_* <--...don't even know what to say...***

I lub it. U are fan-fucking-tastic. I never liked HP fanfics, but this is the most well written fic I have read in a long time. I love reading, yet am soo bad when it comes to writing. I admire those that truely make language an ART.
Toodles. ^_~*
person nadia
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...*_* ...don't even know what to say...***

I lub it. U are fan-fucking-tastic. I never liked HP fanfics, but this is the most well written fic I have read in a long time. I love reading, yet am soo bad when it comes to writing. I admire those that truely make language an ART.
Toodles. ^_~*
person Karen
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I like the way you right. The whole stream of consciousness thing works well. I don't find it hard to follow at all and actually prefer it to some of the more structured stories I've read. Loving it so far and I think you're right...this does seem far more plausible of a relationship
person Karen
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I like the way you write. The whole stream of consciousness thing works well. I don't find it hard to follow at all and actually prefer it to some of the more structured stories I've read. Loving it so far and I think you're right...this does seem far more plausible of a relationship
person Holden
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a beautifly eaw story. I love the emotions you have given these characters, so real. Keep up the fantastic work. You have truely touched my heart love.

You are amayzing.

Holden

p.s. we should pen pal sometime. whatca think?
person Karen
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This chapter was unbelievable! This fiction is vastly climbing to the top of my favorite, right now it's right behind Pany's Volcano and Adamo Fidelites. What the hell, you can bump Adamo since she hasn't updated in over a year. Promise you won't take a break like that! Well, I am so pleased with the way you brought about their first time. I'm so sick of reading fic's that have Draco turning into some gushing romantic, however, I would like to see him become a bit softer, if only in the sense that he works through his demons somewhat. I hope this story ends with them together, however that may come about but as I said in my other review, I have no idea where you are going with this but I'm along for the ride. Please don't make us wait too long...no preasure. LOL
person Janelle
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know this is fantastic.
Perfect.
person superscar
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No, it was perfect. Everything it should have been and so incredibly beautiful in the rawness of it.

I loved it, can't wait to see more.
person tashi
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was AMAZING I am in love definitely so far. The build up to chapter 12 was KILLING ME!
I understand how college can take time from writing, I write H/Dr stories too on FF.NET and I know how it can get frustrating to write and keep up in school, work, and social life at the same time, so as one author to another, take your time but hurry too lol we all cannot wait for Chapter 13!!
Please email me if you can on your next update!
Thank you a lot!