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for Water

by kissherdraco

person Rinova
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is the first story I ever reviewed on aff. Wow, well... I just noticed teh review button. lol.. BUT ANYWAY, I LOVE THIS STORY> I've been checking up on it every now and then. I almost died when i looked in my favorites to see if you updated Water2.. and it wasn't there. Something in me told me to type the fic in in Search.. and whoo, I found it. With two extra chapters. (I was so happy.)

WEll, NOW i"M DYING... YOU GOTTA UPDATE!!! SOON AND FAST!!!

Cuz, I'm loving it. And I love how they stay in character... I mean... they don't just go... from hate to love... but... slowly move into the love thing. ya know? It's more... real?

MAN, I LOVE THIS FIC>..
person T
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!

I DON'T BELIEVE YOU, YOU ARE SOOOOOOOOOOO UNBELIEVABLE!!!!!!!!!!!

I have to find out happens!!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write the rest and QUICKLY!

LOVE this story by the way and can't wait until you do more.

I will be checking ALOT!

KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!

LOVE T!
person ShortieGirl
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My Love!!! I am caught between wanting to cry and wanting to throw up! I can never read one of your chapters without getting all worked up. Who the hell is getting ready to rape Hermione? Did Pansy polyjuice herself? I am literally sick to my stomach with worry! I know I say this every time but you are fucking Amazing!!!!!!!
person Michelle
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You can't end it there. I loved the chapter. Update soon
person bluebear_74
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Squee* UPDATE!! I'm glad you posted both the chapters and not just 16 because that would have killed me.

God these two crazy kids need to stop fighting, especially when it's such silly things, make love not war *winks* could Draco do 'something' for me too? Nerveless I'm glad Hermione finally got to.... get 'off'. Looks like Draco and Hermione won't be getting their get their talk after all, and I was really hoping Draco would get to tell her what he wanted too. However your driving me insane with the cliff hanger, I'm going to guess the obvious that it's Pansy, but if it is, what is she hoping it'll do? Will Draco come save her from "Harry"?
person zara
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what your ambitions in life are, but as a writer you would have great future....Please understand that my English is not too well, so excuse my mistakes...Your writing is brisk and clear and soooo strong and totaly consuming. You have amzing power of gluing people to their seats and...um...screens. I know you get it all the time, but I said it anyway. I realy love your story....and there is only one more fic that can be compared to it...in it's graetness ( Pansy's Volcano) even though it is a bit lighter and, well, kind of different. Anyway...please don't make me wait this long for the next chapter....and I think they had enough of tearing one another apart....so, go easy on them both ^___^ zara
person kazfeist
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yup, all's real tense. Great couple of chapters, and glad to see you're back writing it....are you going to put it up at Contraveritas, as well? I hope so. It's easier to find it there. Great Job!
person ocardsienim
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i adore .....adore adore. this writing. you are amazing and wonderful. raw emotions are so spectacular. the cliff was a little sadding. but just makes one anxious for the next. thank you
person Nicole
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! THAT WAS A CLIFFY. PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I AM DYING TO FIGURE OUT WHO IT IS. PLEASE UPDATE! THANKS.
person Ava
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Talk about a cliffy! Yipes. Every time I read a new chapter of this story, I just feel awed by your talent, and the beauty of this story. I hope there's more soon, but either way I'll be waiting anxiously.