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THANKS FOR THAT CLIFFHANGER! Wow, I think it's polyjuice. Freakin' A, that was a good chapter. I hope this gets updated soon because I can't wait for the next chapter. What's Draco going to tell her? That he *luvs* her? hahaha I don't know, but this is so good. Good job :)

grrrrrrr, you are so infuriating!!! that was an awful cliffie! but thanx so much for an awesome update. i feared the story was getting a bit stuck, but now it is moving along nicely again with these chapters. the theme of control and descions is very interesting and i loved the subtle way you wrote it. i would glady buy anything you ever published and i'm sure it would end up in either a psychology or lit class if not both. thanx again and please be as quick as possible on the update because i fear i may explode from curiousty and anticipation if i don't find out what happens next soon.

I love it, i absolutely do! its the best H/D fic i have read in a long long time. You absolutely must continue it! (it only took me three days to read the whole think from end to end) Im going to die of impatience if you dont add another chapter soon! -Thistle

WTF! WWWWWTTTTTFFFFFFF! You can't leave it like that! You can't!

The last bits were great. Not that the rest wasn't, but with the last I was all like "Whaaaa?" and then "Ooooooh," and then "Huuuuuuh?" and lastly, "Gaaaasp!". Seriously. Wonderfully done. I eagerly await the rest. ;)

You're killing us! I just started reading this fanfiction just a few weeks ago...and after today...I can't stand not knowing more...sooner! The writing is exquisite by the way! As cheesy as it sounds, it reminds me of the quotes English teachers note for later reference on wonderful writing...Shakespeare...Poe...kissherdraco...

Not to make a joke (I really want another chapter SOONER) but I mean it. Keep up the good work. And you should seriously think about writing a novella of your own one day. If you could do this with borrowed characters and premises, thinking what's in your own imagination would just awe the world! Thanks for sharing your talent!

this fic is incredible - it's so well written and the way you describe the feelings of the characters is so clever and makes the reader empathise with all of the characters' feelings. i was completely immersed in this story! update soon
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this just keeps getting better and better. update when you can! love your story and i hope you can write more Hermione/Draco whenever inspiration comes to you! You're fantastic! :)

Let me start off by saying that I am a huge fan of your story. I found it about 3 months ago and have been not-so-patiently awaiting an update; so you can imagine my utter excitement to have seen that chapters 16 & 17 were up last night. But, what's the deal with chapter 16? A bit fluffy and VERY random. I was a bit lost, especially because it was about a 1/4 of the usual length and seemed to have come at me from nowhere; weird. It just felt awkward to me. Chapter 17 was better, but I don't feel that ineer struggle/turmoil/angst that made me love your story to begin with. I guess at some point it does have to progress past the whole"I fucking hate you so much that I can't live without you" stage, but I love that stage! It is nice to see Draco at least coming to terms with his feelings for Hermione. Hopefully, she too will realize her own feelings. Ha Ha, that's how I know you are a great writer! I am usually soooooo pro Harry/Hermione, but your story has me rooting for Hermione/Draco! AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH! I was almost disgusted with myself at the end of chapter 17, when 'Harry" was coming on to Hermione. I was thinking "she's Draco's, leave her alone Potter!" What is wrong with me? You are just too damn good. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. I do hope it will have more of the inner monologue and self-consuming battles of will that I felt were so abundant in the first 15 chapters, but were definitely missed by me in 16/17. I'll leave with a few lines from one of my fav. Coldplay songs...

LIGHTS WILL GUIDE YOU HOME
AND IGNITE YOUR BONES
AND I WILL TRY TO FIX YOU...

ok really good chap, but i don't really understand.... did draco find them? was the last paragraph after or before harry tried to attack hermione? ohhh maybe im just a dumbass? please update soon i really need answers 2 the questions!!!! your story is one of my favs by the way!!!!

Ok i just wanted u to know, i read the reviews and I get it now......its someone else polyjuced.... ha ha silly little old me. i feel so silly...ha ha. plz update asap.