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Wow. Just...wow. Haha. This story is amazing. I really hope you update soon though, because I don't think I can go for very long without reading more. ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. I find Draco and Hermione's constant bickering kind of annoying, and sometimes I feel like they should be more romantic and sappy, but this is realistic, I guess. Your writing is a relief to read, because for once somebody knows how to put punctuation in all the right places. Haha.

PLEASEEEEEEEEEEE update soon. :)

Oh such an evil cliffhanger. I wonder what Harry did to Hermione. He was really scary in the last part. I hope he didn't do those naughty things which are inappreciate. Cough cough.
Will Draco find out? How will he react? Will he get jealous? I hope bloody yes.
Update soon! This chapter is awesome!
Bye niara01

Your style of writing is quite remarkable. I am an avid JKR Harry Potter fan, the kind that is the first in line when the new books are released, and the movies come out! The woman is sheer genius, with her creativity level in overdrive! That said, I enjoyed your diversion in pairing Draco with Hermoine, and still staying so true to their characters.

I quite disliked Draco in most of this fanfic. He is a boor, brutish, crass, and very violent in his sexual prowress. However you ever so slowly turn the leaf's color, and the reader finds him to be more tolerables as your story unravels the threads that make up his tapestry of an abused life. Your punctuation and transitions accentuate the story quite a bit. Very unique, and it has such a compelling impact!

I'm still unsure how I feel about Hermoine's surrender... albeit reluctant, I am glad you had her wait so long before succumbing. I didn't like the idea of her first time being so battle worn, amongst the shattered shards of mirror, bruised and broken. But that pretty much sums up her relationship with Draco, very fragile, but yet powerful and physically overpowering. I liked the inner turmoil they both face in coming to realize their feelings for each other.

I can see why this has taken you a year to compose. I spent two days reading this, and then re-read portions. I skipped a day of work to do this! It was too addicting not to continue! It's a good thing I have over 200 vacation hours banked, so that when you update this, I can take another day off! LOL

Thank you for your work. Thank you for spending so much time and effort in creating this, with the vivid details. I will join the queue, waiting for updates! Good luck!

I REALLY like Water. I think it's the best fic I've ever read, at least in this category. I think you're very true to the charectors and you describe their personalities very good.
It's a strong story, the plot is impressive the monolouges are interesting. The angsty parts are refined and not too much, the feelings seems possible for humans and the magic parts are logical.

I don't know what to say. I just like your fic and I wanted you to know

When are you going to update again? It's been far too long that you've left us hanging with that evil cliffhanger, I'm really becoming desperate. I don't remember if I've already told you but this has got to be the best, the most addicting, the most real Dr/Herm fanfic that I've ever encountered (and this is the only category and subcategory I read). I'm not above sending you demanding emeails if you don't write more soon, so please don't let it come to that and update. Please!

Please, come back! This is a terrible cliffy to leave us on. Please, Please, Please update. I love this story so much and I really want to know that happens.

Ok first off, great story. Secondly, I know this must be soo annoying for you but..please update soon :)

Holy Crap-Balls!! I can't believe how intense this story is. I can't stop reading!

Wow, this is a very intense story. I have never read anything like it before and I am absolutely loving it.

Wow this story is amazing. I can believe how close to cannon you made them. I love Draco/Hermione fics but most of the time draco is pretty OOC... but this is freaking PERFECT. You have to continue your one of the best writters I have seen in the fanfiction genre.