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This is my favorite story ever. You have no idea the joy I had when I saw you updated it.

Draco's inner anguish is so real and perfect, it makes me want to run back and re-read it all over again just to enjoy it again.

I love the perfect pacing of the story, how he only moves a degree at a time and has like 0 control of his emotions. And it is so beautiful that Hermione sees him and wants to save him. I do too.

Absolutely beautiful! Well worth the wait. I'll
gladly wait another 8 months for the next great
installment. We will all still be here.
Thank you.

oh wow...i dont think i have ever read a fanfic that was written so well before. there is so much emotion and tension that it's over-whelming, but then at the end, it's not. and its like that for every chapter. i love it! i stayed up all night trying to finish it. lol...i ended up drifting to sleep, and finishing it in the morning.

please update soon!
~Raamiah

this would be such a great fic if it wasnt so f-ing repetative and used the f word every other sentence. there's so much potential but the conversations are so slow and repetative. and they must say the f-word in every other sentence. there's just so much potential... gee. do you get my point? at first it was absolutely enthralling with all the depth of emotions but they have become completely one-sided and every character is angry all the time that the only way they can express themselves is with the f-word apparently. if you plan to even finish the story (it hasnt been updated in forever) plan the whole rest of the thing out that way the moment doesnt carry away the content. the sheer redundency of the conversation is asinine and really detracts from the plot which is starting to crumble. take a step back, look at it, and finish it because its so good and well written by someone who has more than a 9th grade grasp of the english language for once! its exciting and suspenseful and interesting except for the repetative and slow quality of every conversation. go back and read JKR and you'll see that she doesnt often waste an entire page of print on monosyllabic conversation. and time never seems to pass. by chapter 17 they've barely gotten to x-mas. just write out the main happenings for the rest of the story and then fill in the blanks around it so you can complete this. hardly anyone completes anything and it would be so nice to see this great fic finished. continue but improve yourself also. thats what reviews are for right? so you know how and what and where to improve. hardly anyone on this thing uses constructive criticism and i hope i havent been too harsh and hurt your feelings. please keep writing but dont get stuck in a rut or let the moment take off with the story. good luck.

That is one great storie your writting. please bring up to next chapter i'm dying to know what happens next!!!!!i just hope it's a happy emding for them both, you seem to put them through a lot of trouble.haha ok write write write!!!!!! Thank you
from a fan

great story

I am so in love with this story but I hate it as well. 16 chapters of the same thing 16! It is a bit extreme. I am not one to throw Hermione and Draco together immediatly..no no but their relationship is so fricken twisted and now you are going to throw in the complication of Draco being blamed for Hermione being beat up. It is just too much. Seriously you need to give them a respite. Not for one second do I believe Hermione would let him into her bed with the things she has been thinking to him. It is just too unbelievable, Draco has gone insane and Harry has just gone over the edge with the violence. It is not a believable premise, plot and you are drawing it out far too long.

That said, I still cannot get enough. The bathroom scene where Draco finally lost it was POWERFUL. It had me close to tears and I could believe that as their first times. Things had come to a head and BAM...and well i never expected things to be easy between them but GOD you are a sadist. lol

Like I said I have a ton of problems with this fic but it is like a drug...addictive. You are an amazing writer and your style is breathtaking. I do hope you do not get the wrong impression from my review. I just felt being anything less than honest would be a discredit to this work. The fact that you elicit such a strong response from me proves the worth of this fic.

Love, Ally

Brilliant! Thank you.

an update is on the horizon, just give her a bit more time (check her lj)

Argh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You are killing me!

I have been waiting months for more chapters to this story and I decided to seek it out again only to find that you have not UPDATED after all this time!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!

You need to do more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this story sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much and I need to read more of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AGAIN
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AND SOON!

Love TiffANY