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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow i just love this story more and more with every chapter that i read....you keep me on the edge of my seat for most of it aswell. This story is very powerful! I love the detail you use and the depth of the characters you provide, your chapter lengths are fantastic aswell! Please update soon.
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO! That was absolutely fantastic! This is without a doubt one of the best fanfics I've ever had the pleasure to read. You really are a brilliant writer. Please, please, please don't wait so long to update, because if you do I think I will just die. And I think there are definitely great building blocks here for a sequal *hint hint*
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I almost went to bed without checking aff for updates! Thank God I didn't!
WOW! Amazing chapter. IMO, one of the best I've read in this story; and that's saying A LOT! I was slightly disappointed with the last update (16 & 17, but I take it all back after reading this one.
You write Draco, Hermione, Harry and Dumbledore in such an absolutely perfect way. It's almost like I'm reading an NC-17 rated version of HP written by JK herself. You know these characters as if you'd created them...bravo!
One thing that is hitting soooo close to home is the Harry/Hermione relationship. Outside of the fan-fic world, I am a DIE-HARD H/Hr shipper - DIE-HARD! But, in your story, I'm hoping that Harry will come to realize that hermione isn't really 'picking Draco over him' and that his feelings for Hermione aren't romantic (Wow, never thought I'd wish that). I'm hoping that Harry will see that his protection and love for Hermione comes from friendship (ugh, did I just write that?)...your story makes me crazy...I can't believe it makes me root so hard for Harry and Hermione to NOT end up together!
And have I mentioned how much I adore Draco. So vulnerable yet so strong. Words cannot express how well I think you've portrayed him. It's amazing.
Well, can't say enough good things about this chapter...I await the next update!!!!!!!!
WOW! Amazing chapter. IMO, one of the best I've read in this story; and that's saying A LOT! I was slightly disappointed with the last update (16 & 17, but I take it all back after reading this one.
You write Draco, Hermione, Harry and Dumbledore in such an absolutely perfect way. It's almost like I'm reading an NC-17 rated version of HP written by JK herself. You know these characters as if you'd created them...bravo!
One thing that is hitting soooo close to home is the Harry/Hermione relationship. Outside of the fan-fic world, I am a DIE-HARD H/Hr shipper - DIE-HARD! But, in your story, I'm hoping that Harry will come to realize that hermione isn't really 'picking Draco over him' and that his feelings for Hermione aren't romantic (Wow, never thought I'd wish that). I'm hoping that Harry will see that his protection and love for Hermione comes from friendship (ugh, did I just write that?)...your story makes me crazy...I can't believe it makes me root so hard for Harry and Hermione to NOT end up together!
And have I mentioned how much I adore Draco. So vulnerable yet so strong. Words cannot express how well I think you've portrayed him. It's amazing.
Well, can't say enough good things about this chapter...I await the next update!!!!!!!!
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that you've updated! I absolutely adore this fanfic. This chapter was so heart wrenching! I just wanted Hermione to run into the headmaster's office and explain everything. So not fair... And then maybe Pansy can get run over by a bus... yes that would work I think!
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say...LOVE the update!!!!!!!!
Took a while, but truely worth the wait.
Must admit your story is one of the best out there and is my number one favorite!!
Once I saw you've updated I was like a dog with a bone, must have it right away (no matter it was after 3 when I finished reading your wonderfull update). It is how I would see Hermione and Malfoy together; wrong, hurtfull, obsessed, twisted and the most exhillarating experience of a lifetime!! Thats what real starcrossed love is about(think wuthering heights..) Ok, rant much??
And how irritating is Harry!! Showing up at the most impossible time!I actually huffed behind my pc!But then again, it wasn't really him, and my irritation subsided, haha.
But then next, Malfoy not a headboy anymore!!My world crumbled...he cannot be expelled!! Please update soon to recover my devistated mind, hahaha.
Keep up the wonderfull job!!
Yasmin
Took a while, but truely worth the wait.
Must admit your story is one of the best out there and is my number one favorite!!
Once I saw you've updated I was like a dog with a bone, must have it right away (no matter it was after 3 when I finished reading your wonderfull update). It is how I would see Hermione and Malfoy together; wrong, hurtfull, obsessed, twisted and the most exhillarating experience of a lifetime!! Thats what real starcrossed love is about(think wuthering heights..) Ok, rant much??
And how irritating is Harry!! Showing up at the most impossible time!I actually huffed behind my pc!But then again, it wasn't really him, and my irritation subsided, haha.
But then next, Malfoy not a headboy anymore!!My world crumbled...he cannot be expelled!! Please update soon to recover my devistated mind, hahaha.
Keep up the wonderfull job!!
Yasmin
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man oh man - this story just keeps getting better and better. Thank you SO SO much for updating. yay! This is one of my fav stories. So, Hermione's only interested in Draco because he's some kind of pet project for her? Ew. And lil Drakie finally admits that he loves her. Just not to her face. *sigh* Why didn't he tell Dumbledore the truth?? Why is he so damn stubborn? And isn't Dumbledore supposed to know everything that goes on within the school and its grounds?? Hopefully, Hermione will step and clear everything up. Can't wait for more.
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As usual,...it was perfect...I really really love this damn story!
I loved it!!
Love
Evilicious
I loved it!!
Love
Evilicious
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my effing god!!!!!that was just AMAZING!!!You've gotten us all so riled up, it's amazing how you've drawn everyone into the story!!All that waiting was so worth it...i am SO jealous of your talent, ugh...please update soon, or as soon as possible!!!!(And i KNEW it wasn't Harry, it just couldnt be)...
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh how i LOVE this fic.
another incredible chapter.
i hope the next one doesn't take too long!
xx
another incredible chapter.
i hope the next one doesn't take too long!
xx
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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