rate_review Reviews

You are utterly amazing.
Really.
You're prolly the best writer on this site and I am in shock and awe.
Keep updating, I can not wait for the next chapter.
You made my day.

Okay Sir,

I've been reading your story for the past two days, and I must say that I think I'm falling in love. Although you're still using the Head dormitory storyline, I love where you went with this story. It's...amazing, to say the least. Not only was everything falling into place, and you gave it just the right amount of drama, but you made sure you didn't fall into all those annoying cliches. The only critique I HAD was that I skipped around a little when you got to be a bit too descriptive and poetic (I'm just a callous bastard, is all). But of course, this is your style, and who am I to bitch? I'm only just one reader. I was happy, however, when you toned it down in the later chapters and I can't wait until you update.

Keep writing. You're doing great,

Carino

It is so easy to mess up a "my daddy beats me" Draco. Usually, a story with that in it sucks unbelievably. But this. This is different. There are no words for this. It is about the farthest from corny, over done, or cliche as is possible. This is indescribable. This is amazing. This is one of the single best Harry Potter fanfictions... well fanfictions in general... that I have ever read. This is right up there with Afterimage by Gravidy (which if you haven't read you should check out) and God of the Lost which is also by her. This is amazing. I just... god I wish I could find the words. Simply perfect.

I would try more to tell you how much this got me but I want to read the next chapters.

Can't wait for chapter 19!

Such an amazing story. I mean it has it all! the perfect balance really! not too dramatic either too raw! just perfect! can't wait for another update! please update soon.

another fabulous chapter..how do you do it?? Well keep it up can't wait for the next..happy christmas to you.

I'm so glad for this story. It's hard to find well written stories, but this is one of the few. You also got me through an incredibly boring day of receptionist temp work. Thanks a bunch.

Well damn Laura...

When I saw that you said you had updated, at first it was just my happiness in a great friend coming back from a long absence. There was my excitement. LOL! But then, I had to press the link. I had to read where I was left hanging so many months ago.
From day onw, I hace battled through each chapter like everyone else. All the raw emotion this emits... it can cjoke you, so it is like sitting there preparing yourself for something you know is going to crush your chest. Like literally, I have placed my hand over my heart, hoping to abate the pressure. That never works though, does it? No, not with this story, not with how your mind works. Every line I read makes me wonder... 'I know Laura... but damn do I really know pain? Cause she seems to reek it in this story'. Like seriously think that, yes. LOL!

I have got some major love for you hun, you know that, and you always know how I feel about your story. And about how your poetic mind rolls. What a wonderful thing.

I read this chapter, and was floored. All this damn pain for Draco and Hermione. Fuck Harry. I love Harry most of the time, but he drives me in this. LOL!

But not the kind of numb that doesn

I hope Hermione gets her courage back. That's kind of the only problem I am having with this story. By now, I think she should be a bit more sure of herself. Anyway, GREAT chapter...I think you had "it's" for "its" somewhere, but I forget where. :D

Oh thank you for updating! This is such a great story and I love it very much.